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Air sickness bag (Free verse) by Shardik

Sitting next to you on that airplane? Could only be compared to being cooked alive by pygmies with no salt, or culinary etiquette. And when you started comparatively analyzing yourself with models in your magazines? Was right about the time when I asked for a pillow, and a blanket.

Kitch 17-Jun-03/9:01 AM
Change line 10 to Twas about the time' I think it adds a bit more garlic to the salt the pygmies used.

Pretty funny

8 :-)




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