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Free verse № 52998

Dressing up

by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Jun 2003 · 11 comments

Today I put on my Hat I stand ready to enter this place for the first time But I worry about the outcome Will I make it, will I succeed Will I take it, will I fail, miserably Will I walk in, will I walk out Or will I run away screaming at the top of my lungs Today I’m wearing my Business Suit Prepared for my interview But I’m scared I’ll screw up Will I say the wrong words Will I talk too much Will my eyes stare too much Or will It all not be enough Today I wear my Gentleman’s Shoes To dance with the devil on innocence’s grave But this scares me more than you’ll ever know Will my footfalls be enough to beat the best Will I slip and fall on my face Will I be able to keep my heart mine Or will I lose all to be in your control once again…

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[3] Kitch 17-Jun-03/9:05 AM Reply
Didn't like it ! to much will i this and made me not care about living. 3
[3] Kitch 17-Jun-03/9:06 AM Reply
Will i be handsome,
will i be rich,
here's what she said to me,
kay sara, sara,
whatever will be, will be
the futures not ours to see,
kay sara sara.

Is this a sequel if it is then cor blimey its great?
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › Kitch 17-Jun-03/12:24 PM Reply
I love ignorant people. Take a Closer look. The words Hat, Business Suit, and Gentleman's Shoes(which should actually be shoe)are all Capitalised. Instead of my typical random capitalisation it has a purpose. Here is another hint for you, innocence's grave, dancing, succes, failure. If your still missing it your mind isn't far enough in the gutter.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › thepinkbunnyofdoom 17-Jun-03/1:04 PM Reply
When you say "I love ignorant people", what you meant was "Ignorant people really irritate me, but if I said that then people wouldn't like me, so I'll say that I love them, which hopefully will make me seem carefree and easy-going". In conclusion, stop posting.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Jun-03/1:35 PM Reply
No being ignorant myself your highness, I love my ignorant fellows. You want me to stop posting. Right away my Lord. This Instant. I mean fuck freedom of speech, or expression. Please put more words in my mouth Master so that I might enjoy the stinging taste of your cruel, vindictive wit, which I so Earnstly Deserve.

P.S. I loved your reading of netwined poem. Absolutly Riveting, and Dare I say Funny(What is sad is that isn't sarcasm I really was busting a gut for well over 2 minutes).
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Jun-03/7:01 AM Reply
Go back to your livejournal and post about your Interesting Life. Your hamstringed irony is demeaning us both.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Jun-03/10:37 PM Reply
Aww... aren't you so cute! Yes you are! Does his Mighty One want a cookie? You are so precious, D.A. Really you are. Don't let anyone tell you different. I would go back to my livejournal but can't you tell that my life centers around you sunshine. As for the irony? What Irony?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › thepinkbunnyofdoom 19-Jun-03/1:16 AM Reply
The ironing of you continuing to post despite the fact that your trousers fell down long, long ago.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Jun-03/7:10 AM Reply
Come Come Now Dear Old Chap, Would you expect anything less. Now as for the Ironing, if my trousers had fallen I'd just be my iron on the ironing board and AHH! FIRE! THE IRONING BOARD IS ON FIRE! AHH! NO THE CURTAINS! AHHHHHHHH! THE SEMBLANCE OF MY DIGNITY! oh well since the flame is already going, might as Well light up a J and say fuck it.
[n/a] lunar 20-Jun-03/12:42 PM Reply
I DONT LIKE MY COMMENTS BEING DELEATED IF I SAY YOU MUST HAIL THE POT, THEN YOU HAVE NO CHOICE.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › lunar 20-Jun-03/5:23 PM Reply
Okay!?! Hail Pot!! Hail!! Hail!!