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Dressing up (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom Today I put on my Hat
I stand ready to enter this place for the first time
But I worry about the outcome
Will I make it, will I succeed
Will I take it, will I fail, miserably
Will I walk in, will I walk out
Or will I run away screaming at the top of my lungs
Today Iâm wearing my Business Suit
Prepared for my interview
But Iâm scared Iâll screw up
Will I say the wrong words
Will I talk too much
Will my eyes stare too much
Or will It all not be enough
Today I wear my Gentlemanâs Shoes
To dance with the devil on innocenceâs grave
But this scares me more than youâll ever know
Will my footfalls be enough to beat the best
Will I slip and fall on my face
Will I be able to keep my heart mine
Or will I lose all to be in your control once againâ¦
Up the ladder:
Rockmage, I was going to pay him...
Down the ladder:
Stuffy
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Posted: June 15, 2003 11:28 AM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2003 11:28 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.409091 Overall Rank: 760 Comments:
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Kitch @ 62.105.88.10
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17-Jun-03/9:05 AM
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Didn't like it ! to much will i this and made me not care about living. 3
Will i be handsome,
will i be rich, here's what she said to me, kay sara, sara, whatever will be, will be the futures not ours to see, kay sara sara. Is this a sequel if it is then cor blimey its great?
I love ignorant people. Take a Closer look. The words Hat, Business Suit, and Gentleman's Shoes(which should actually be shoe)are all Capitalised. Instead of my typical random capitalisation it has a purpose. Here is another hint for you, innocence's grave, dancing, succes, failure. If your still missing it your mind isn't far enough in the gutter.
When you say "I love ignorant people", what you meant was "Ignorant people really irritate me, but if I said that then people wouldn't like me, so I'll say that I love them, which hopefully will make me seem carefree and easy-going". In conclusion, stop posting.
No being ignorant myself your highness, I love my ignorant fellows. You want me to stop posting. Right away my Lord. This Instant. I mean fuck freedom of speech, or expression. Please put more words in my mouth Master so that I might enjoy the stinging taste of your cruel, vindictive wit, which I so Earnstly Deserve.
P.S. I loved your reading of netwined poem. Absolutly Riveting, and Dare I say Funny(What is sad is that isn't sarcasm I really was busting a gut for well over 2 minutes).
Go back to your livejournal and post about your Interesting Life. Your hamstringed irony is demeaning us both.
Aww... aren't you so cute! Yes you are! Does his Mighty One want a cookie? You are so precious, D.A. Really you are. Don't let anyone tell you different. I would go back to my livejournal but can't you tell that my life centers around you sunshine. As for the irony? What Irony?
The ironing of you continuing to post despite the fact that your trousers fell down long, long ago.
Come Come Now Dear Old Chap, Would you expect anything less. Now as for the Ironing, if my trousers had fallen I'd just be my iron on the ironing board and AHH! FIRE! THE IRONING BOARD IS ON FIRE! AHH! NO THE CURTAINS! AHHHHHHHH! THE SEMBLANCE OF MY DIGNITY! oh well since the flame is already going, might as Well light up a J and say fuck it.
I DONT LIKE MY COMMENTS BEING DELEATED IF I SAY YOU MUST HAIL THE POT, THEN YOU HAVE NO CHOICE.
Okay!?! Hail Pot!! Hail!! Hail!!
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