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Dressing up (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Today I put on my Hat I stand ready to enter this place for the first time But I worry about the outcome Will I make it, will I succeed Will I take it, will I fail, miserably Will I walk in, will I walk out Or will I run away screaming at the top of my lungs Today I’m wearing my Business Suit Prepared for my interview But I’m scared I’ll screw up Will I say the wrong words Will I talk too much Will my eyes stare too much Or will It all not be enough Today I wear my Gentleman’s Shoes To dance with the devil on innocence’s grave But this scares me more than you’ll ever know Will my footfalls be enough to beat the best Will I slip and fall on my face Will I be able to keep my heart mine Or will I lose all to be in your control once again…

thepinkbunnyofdoom 17-Jun-03/12:24 PM
I love ignorant people. Take a Closer look. The words Hat, Business Suit, and Gentleman's Shoes(which should actually be shoe)are all Capitalised. Instead of my typical random capitalisation it has a purpose. Here is another hint for you, innocence's grave, dancing, succes, failure. If your still missing it your mind isn't far enough in the gutter.




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