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Fate Sucks (Free verse) by Kitch
Everyone has their last place on earth they avoid.
Well fate packed my suitcase and its overjoyed.
Fate plays its hand and we always follow,
But as the game gets harder it gets harder to swallow.
We play a safe hand,
Fate likes to gamble,
Fate is ambitious,
Its nature vicious,
We have limitations,
Whereas fates is substantial.
I have mixed feelings about fate,
Itâs a relationship of love and hate.
Have faith in it,
Yes never see what what I wait for,
And if she calls,
My heart always falls,
And thatâs what fates for.
I canât accept a relationship of give and take,
For I want to give my world,
All of me,
So she can fall with me,
And drown in sunshine on the lake.
I want to recite the balcony scene from Romeo and Juliet,
Look in to her eyes so sheâll never forget,
That my life rests in palm of her hands,
Like time through her fingers,
Like falling sands.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7547
Posted: June 12, 2003 4:03 AM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2003 4:03 AM PDT
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Please tell me the lines you liked and the ones that are a waste of time.