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Fate Sucks (Free verse) by Kitch

Everyone has their last place on earth they avoid. Well fate packed my suitcase and its overjoyed. Fate plays its hand and we always follow, But as the game gets harder it gets harder to swallow. We play a safe hand, Fate likes to gamble, Fate is ambitious, Its nature vicious, We have limitations, Whereas fates is substantial. I have mixed feelings about fate, It’s a relationship of love and hate. Have faith in it, Yes never see what what I wait for, And if she calls, My heart always falls, And that’s what fates for. I can’t accept a relationship of give and take, For I want to give my world, All of me, So she can fall with me, And drown in sunshine on the lake. I want to recite the balcony scene from Romeo and Juliet, Look in to her eyes so she’ll never forget, That my life rests in palm of her hands, Like time through her fingers, Like falling sands.

Kitch 12-Jun-03/1:11 PM
Hey Horus8

I will never leave you alone with your prostitutes but point taken I know I have a lot to learn I'm 19 and I have come here to learn from the masters. Mona Lisa (who referred me) is scared of this site bless her ! I welsome any comment, insult, praise whatever bring it on...so long as i learn my souls up for sale.

thanks for your comment.




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