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Free verse № 52977

To Mouse and Reason

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Jun 2003 · 4 comments

I am nothing I have done nothing You are what you do I am nothing Nobody loves nothing They all love something Even if it's a little something You can't have both A little something can never be nothing Everyone wants something I am nothing Nobady wants me You are what people make you I am nothing

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[2] Freethinker1602 14-Jun-03/9:55 PM Reply
get a life..too much repition. try going to a church, there is infinite love there, after all it was god who gave his son. And only you can decide what it is you are to be. so make someting of it2
[n/a] INTRANSIT 15-Jun-03/8:12 AM Reply
Great title, great moniker. poor poem . IPK's right.
try again.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 15-Jun-03/11:47 AM Reply
Pimple Poem Buddy. Felt by you and every one else. Love the Title, Hate the Drivel beneath. Not trying to be mean but I've got a bummer sticker that says the same damn thing without being nearly as long or annoyingly repeative, while stating the obvious.
[6] horus8 15-Jun-03/12:20 PM Reply
You should read this first, and then proceed with the utmost caution. good luck.

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