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To Mouse and Reason (Free verse) by Spindle I am nothing
I have done nothing
You are what you do
I am nothing
Nobody loves nothing
They all love something
Even if it's a little something
You can't have both
A little something can never be nothing
Everyone wants something
I am nothing
Nobady wants me
You are what people make you
I am nothing
Up the ladder:
Re-coil
Down the ladder:
swamp of devils
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Posted: June 14, 2003 9:34 PM PDT; Last modified: June 14, 2003 9:34 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.59471 Overall Rank: 12560 Comments:
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Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129
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14-Jun-03/9:55 PM
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get a life..too much repition. try going to a church, there is infinite love there, after all it was god who gave his son. And only you can decide what it is you are to be. so make someting of it2
Great title, great moniker. poor poem . IPK's right.
try again.
Pimple Poem Buddy. Felt by you and every one else. Love the Title, Hate the Drivel beneath. Not trying to be mean but I've got a bummer sticker that says the same damn thing without being nearly as long or annoyingly repeative, while stating the obvious.
You should read this first, and then proceed with the utmost caution. good luck.
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i 143 view(s)
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