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Re-coil (Free verse) by markmidgett
1 a : to fall back under pressure b : to shrink back physically or emotionally 2 : to spring back to or as if to a starting point re-coil what a surgeon does to one’s intestines after a colostomy re-coil at the horror of september 11 re-coil what the cat did after he missed the mouse re-coil not from a friend just saying hello

Up the ladder: Easy Way Out
Down the ladder: To Mouse and Reason

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.6
Weighted score: 4.59471
Overall Rank: 12564
Posted: May 6, 2003 3:38 PM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2003 3:38 PM PDT
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[6] deleted user @ 64.12.96.46 | 6-May-03/6:40 PM | Reply
hmm its different, there is something here i like but i'm not sure what it is, -6-
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