Re: Pendulum swing lines by INTRANSIT	15-Jun-03/11:31 AM
I think "Distant friend,". Other than that, Fairly nice. -7-
Re: One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl	13-Jun-03/1:16 PM
Yes, I think it sounds better but I still don't like the 'A wishful ache' because It seems to me that your saying the momentary release is a wishful ache, when I think it'd go better as 'With a wishful ache'. Still a -9- cause its very good.
Re: a comment on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8	13-Jun-03/11:36 AM
I can nominate whatever I want!! Its merely beyond my power to Grant you your own reward.
Re: Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT	13-Jun-03/11:26 AM
Interesting Idea about the spiritual influence but it still sounds like a stretch to me. I Love this poem by the way. -10-
Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8	13-Jun-03/11:18 AM
LOL, seriously. I'm nominating this for a GOLDEN Q-TIP. -10-
Re: So Simple by Audaciouslilgrl	13-Jun-03/11:10 AM
You forgot teaching your dog to fetch with dynomite and then then lighting the fuse. -6-
Re: Advise by Audaciouslilgrl	13-Jun-03/11:07 AM
You really over did it at the end with all the OO ryhmes. I think you should take Rob's Advice and Read some more poetry, cause we see alot of cliche poems here. Its not too bad a poem but maybe next time forget the ryhme and just say what your trying to say.
Re: One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl	13-Jun-03/10:41 AM
I suggest replacing farce with charade, and instead of Of a wishful ache, I'd go with With a wishful. <- I think that it goes better with the momentary release.
Re: a comment on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom	13-Jun-03/10:35 AM
Way to break it down there for the retard, but this isn't Teenage thinking involved here. It's More complex than that.
Re: a comment on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom	13-Jun-03/3:21 AM
lol. You're right. Golly Jeepers, 9:00 pm Thats WAY too late for me Mister! All the other stuff you said is really non-swell and I wish you wouldn't say such naughty things. You've corrupted my Virgin Ears, and Mommy says if sees you behind our White Trash Trailer, shes got a sawed off shot gun and a bullet with your name on it(I thought she was Kidding too Mister but then she showed it to me).
Re: a comment on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom	13-Jun-03/3:10 AM
Close but still no cigar, This isn't written in about being a teenager.
Re: a comment on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Jun-03/6:18 PM
Nice Answer And I can see it, But that was accidental
Re: a comment on Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom	8-Jun-03/9:18 PM
Slander is the spoken word so it'd be Libel, cause this is print. It might be, depends on your perspective. I see it as a clever way of calling myself a Jackass, but hey whatever flips your pancake <~>.
Re: a comment on Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom	8-Jun-03/3:12 PM
My mouth is to Dick or mouth? Thats rich, really. Take a look Bachus, If any of this was ment as anything other than a joke, it'd have to the line Identifying myself with a Jackass. The rest is humor and nothing more so relax, take a valuim, and get your knickers out of a twist. Good for you on hating a man who has been dead for longer than our combined life times(Hate his work, Hate his words, but Don't hate someone you've never had the chance to communicate 2 words with). Oh do be more original than Fuck Nose. You have at least half a braincell so use it. I have recently provided plenty of ammo for a more witty insult than that so the least you could do is think up a clever way of calling me a twit. :)
Re: a comment on Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Jun-03/12:38 PM
No reason in particular, Just thought that reference should be made to the british crown while I was at it.
Re: a comment on Triolet, for Jason by beakism	6-Jun-03/3:32 PM
I have already begged your forgiveness god! Must I be forever tormented by my aweful sins. I weep tears in Shame for so displeasing you god. I beg only forgiveness.
Re: a comment on Triolet, for Jason by beakism	6-Jun-03/3:12 PM
Yum WEE
Re: a comment on Triolet, for Jason by beakism	6-Jun-03/3:11 PM
No I say things and they come off as being redundant or over lapping. Its because I have slight brain damage from smoking coffee. I was saying(or trying to) that my claim of D.A. comminting Libel and Plagiarism isn't libel because it is in question of the fact of whether or not he had in fact done so. The fact that I wasn't just out and out going and posting on every other poem here that D.A. is Guilty of Plagiarism/Libel but that I kept it within a fine margin, trying to express a complaint is different. To be proven guilty of Libel it only has to be proven that you in fact said it, Satire Laws make it a bit hard to determine if in Fact it is Libel and I'm tired of arguing it. I don't want to have to retrace every comment made in the situtation, nor try and prove the intent behind them. Don't even go there with my spelling or my caps. My caps mean I'd be stressing the word if I was saying it aloud. Being as to how I CAN type anywhere Muwhahaha I'm pretty sure making sure isn't a problem.
Re: Triolet, for Jason by beakism	6-Jun-03/2:10 PM
Speaking without Knowledge, isn't that what your mocking me for here? I do Happen to know about Libel and Slander, and copyright protections. I may not be a lawyer but as a DJ for a radio station I have to know about such things. So next time you assume someone has no clue what the hell they are talking about, make sure they don't.
Re: a comment on Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom	5-Jun-03/4:45 PM
Actually it is a reference to stigmata, a movie I had watched with the individual this is about.