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It's funny (Free verse) by Dangzter
You know it's funny how A country is considered the greatest society in the world when A 50 year old man can take the virginity of a child and praise the ways of rightousness when A 30 something year old woman can rant on and on about senseless jargon and recieve appraisal when A 10 year old boy worships some fictional monster that exists in some bullshit fairy land when A deposit of semen from a 50 year old man can be used as currency bought by a 30 year old woman to make a 10 year old boy. It's funny

Up the ladder: Christ Kebab
Down the ladder: Middleman

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3127
Posted: June 15, 2003 8:54 PM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2003 8:54 PM PDT
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[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 16-Jun-03/10:47 AM | Reply
Your right it is. I actually laughed out loud reading this. In fact I'd just like to take the time to say
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Okay, nope not yet
Hahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahaha
Here just take your -10-
[10] RealmOfSong @ 64.254.42.11 | 17-Jun-03/8:50 AM | Reply
This is great, and oh so true. ^_^
[7] richa @ 195.92.67.208 | 17-Jun-03/11:10 AM | Reply
a fairly standard structure but i enjoyes this

try to lose mentioning a 50 yr old man twice
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