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It's funny (Free verse) by Dangzter

You know it's funny how A country is considered the greatest society in the world when A 50 year old man can take the virginity of a child and praise the ways of rightousness when A 30 something year old woman can rant on and on about senseless jargon and recieve appraisal when A 10 year old boy worships some fictional monster that exists in some bullshit fairy land when A deposit of semen from a 50 year old man can be used as currency bought by a 30 year old woman to make a 10 year old boy. It's funny

richa 17-Jun-03/11:10 AM
a fairly standard structure but i enjoyes this

try to lose mentioning a 50 yr old man twice




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