Re: a comment on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>	9-Mar-03/4:06 PM
Oh, and my problem? Shit poetry from you while we're well on our way to a nucleur winter, therefore, i would say my problem is the denial of this sad backwards fucking country full of shitty poets that right about fetuses hating their fucking parents from heaven idiot, you should give up poetry and go vote for something worthwhile since i can't being that i'm a convicted felon, and planning civilian red dawn type anarchy books for the apocalypse. Fear MABUS the third antichrist. that means the son of bus`h.
Re: a comment on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>	9-Mar-03/3:14 PM
How about your face? That would make a splendid metaphor, better then your acting.
Re: a comment on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>	9-Mar-03/3:12 PM
Hey, LeBlanc. Go fuckyourself. Your poetry fucking sucks idiot. guess what? Go fuck your teachers too, they did a hoorible job, and also your priest? A fag, yes, a fag, so go fuck yourself, dickchin. I don't like christians, jews, or especially french prolife twits.You must be here for poetry... Because you don't have any.
Re: Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe	7-Mar-03/2:17 PM
"Tanging taglay ay pag-asa" likewise i'm sure.
Re: a comment on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik	7-Mar-03/2:09 PM
ohh..spin it.?
Re: a comment on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik	7-Mar-03/2:07 PM
i was being funny, but give me an example.
Re: who? by Crakyamuni	7-Mar-03/12:30 PM
lol.
Re: a comment on Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos	7-Mar-03/12:18 PM
You might be better then me on a certain poetic level. But I have a hungry mind and all the time in the world. If you gave this a four though i would rather you remove your vote. Simply because this piece is better then a 4 and we both know it. Plus, it's very personal to me, and i would consider that a favor. Otherwise, we have nothing more to discussw
Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	7-Mar-03/12:08 PM
That's good shit. Haven't i read this somewhere? Glad i didn't put my foot in my mouth. You are a better poet, and i could learn from you. Thanks, you're right i am still a boy, but i'm growing fast. Great poem.
Re: I have nothing left to steal. by lost in america	7-Mar-03/12:05 PM
That's good though. Still not tapping hidden ideas however, but damn fine work.
Re: first kiss by lost in america	7-Mar-03/12:03 PM
it's okay, but hardly profound.
Re: a comment on Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos	7-Mar-03/12:02 PM
Oh old one pray tell what we should do different to shake the youthfull energy that we set out for in this piece, and obviously achieved. How would you edit this then? What was young about it other then it being from the perspective of a 4 year old? What does young mean to you? I hope you're not elderly with alzheimers and lost in an rv? I have been writing poetry on a better level then you, and quite longer then you assume, i assure you. Don't jump to conclusions you can't back up with physical work. I will take a look at your work first though, before i stick your head in my mouth. Let's take a look? shall we?
Re: a comment on Love spank by Shardik	7-Mar-03/11:41 AM
Yes, but I found that out after getting a couple of high hits Mr. Foster, and was like "Who cares ? (having momentarilly forgotten your insistant scholastic hang ups and scoutings ahead)." It adds a LAYER of normal human error that I rather enjoy sir, called the perfection in being imperfectly aware, always. A permenant mushroom trip. An inbetween world, between the genders, the words, the cities, the atmospere and space. the water on the shore. the constant change from right and wrong to night and day. With a shell at my ear I heard birth dying to live again. Somewhere else.
Re: a comment on Aries, the God of war by Shardik	6-Mar-03/3:23 PM
Ram horns crash, hoving Whet stones sharply grind, census Mars in retrograde.
Re: Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95	6-Mar-03/1:42 PM
Cauldron. Within. Blackened.
Re: a comment on Aries, the God of war by Shardik	6-Mar-03/1:36 PM
How about now?
Re: First Confirmation by babyBOOMER	6-Mar-03/12:22 PM
Gripping and punctually perfect.
Re: Mens Cocks Have No Style by spank me baby yeah	4-Mar-03/6:18 PM
No problem, but I have a beautifull cock, so I guess your argument is with God tit-teeth, and i'm sure there are a lot of other men who are willing to step forward here and proclaim that they too have pretty puds, stud monkey was it? yes i think it was. Also; i know woman that will come forward with the truth. That they also have eye friendly floggers, my friend soooooooo that said. YOU just got the short end of the stick, friend, buddy, pal, aquaintance, surrogate toothpaste unfolder, visor flipper, pool cleaner.
Re: a comment on Quadroons by Shardik	4-Mar-03/6:01 PM
You think I wrote this to do what now? Exactly.
Re: Homecomings by Nicholas Jones	4-Mar-03/5:52 PM
The top five lines are redundant. The rest a hell of a meal. Simple, and pleasantly sinister.