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The Guardian, page nineteen (Haiku) by Nicholas Jones
crumpled newsprint shows obituaries birthdays life death on same page
Down the ladder: Unlocking Happiness
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Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8711
Posted: March 4, 2003 6:54 AM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 7:06 AM PST
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[9] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 4-Mar-03/10:48 AM | Reply
nice one.
why not "life and death--same page"
for proper syllabel count? why break form, without purpose?
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 > <~> | 5-Mar-03/7:05 AM | Reply
I missed a word out typing it in - I apologise for disrespecting the Japanese nation in this manner.
[7] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Mar-03/5:49 PM | Reply
The laws of the universe states that to be quite normal Mr. Jones.
[8] DurtKL @ 68.23.223.164 | 5-Mar-03/7:12 AM | Reply
nice
[9] deleted user @ 204.210.242.17 | 5-Mar-03/10:48 AM | Reply
wonderful
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