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"Dreams Come and Dreams Go" (Free verse) by Pooh_N_His_Honey
Dreams come and dreams go, The tears fell on my pillow like a waterfall, Man I'll tell you I've had my share of both. Living your life as you sleep, The happiness you lock up in your dreams. The clock rings at 7, With misty eyes from heaven. Time to face the world with your problems on your shoulders, Life will only get better if you do something about it. No since in living your life in a dream, Dreams come and dreams go. Baby you better move on and get on with the show. Living life on one hell of a coaster ride, Fast paced motion flashing by your eyes, Closing them pretty blues and saying your good-byes. Packed bags in your arms, Back to the door, Stepping on firm ground, walking straight towards a new life. Dreams come and dreams go, Waking up to find out who you really are, The person you want to be is in front of your eyes. Look in the mirror, Open your heart, You've taken the step to make that new start. Dreams come and dreams go, Love fell in my lap; we were a creation of fate, Angels were overlooking us on that bright and sunny day. You took my hand and showed me the way. We found true love and it's hear to stay. Dreams come and dreams go, Dreaming you into my life, Dreams come and dreams go, Got you safely locked in my heart, Dreams come... True

Up the ladder: distance
Down the ladder: The Guardian, page nineteen

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8705
Posted: February 10, 2003 4:06 PM PST; Last modified: February 10, 2003 4:06 PM PST
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[5] Mr Pig @ 62.105.88.10 | 11-Feb-03/2:09 AM | Reply
too much said in a generic narrative here, try avaoiding the obvious descriptions of lament. However keep on trying, writing is a friend of solace >5
[n/a] suckmychucks @ 64.41.22.175 | 10-Apr-03/11:57 AM | Reply
this is not a limerick, nor worth finishing at that early realization, you putz.
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