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Free verse № 42742

Blackened Cauldron

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Mar 2003 · Edited 8 Mar 2003 · 5 comments

The Burning toil within my soul, as if an evil witch stirs my gutt from with in her black cauldron, to my end. The turbulant chantings of the end whisper to my heaving bones. No rest I can find with this turbulance inside myself. No peace I gather from the Evil spell, of dark witch who controls me with spells of evil.

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[n/a] Shardik 6-Mar-03/1:42 PM Reply
Cauldron.
Within.
Blackened.
[n/a] horus8 8-Mar-03/10:59 AM Reply
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Blackened Cauldron (Free verse) by Ellie95

With spells of evil.

The turbulant chantings of the
end whisper to my heaving bones.
as if an evil witch stirs my gutt
from within her black cauldron,

No rest can I find with this
turbulance inside.
No peace I gather from the Evil
The dark witch controls me.

I know this deep in my soul.
[3] Signature › horus8 21-May-04/12:35 AM Reply
CLOWNIN'

Sprucing up other peoples poems I read. Well you definitely did it justice. You and Ellie should collaborate sometime... On second thought, we should coincide on a artistic production. Oh yeah tis me "Sigh'ense...", but dont tell anybody. hit me back and let me know whats the verdiction. Welcome back.
[n/a] daryash-koh 21-Jul-03/10:15 AM Reply
This poem reminds me of the last time I ate taco bell.
[3] Signature 21-May-04/12:28 AM Reply
Ohhh. K. Obsess much?