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At the end of the Day (Free verse) by -vz18- At the end of the day youâll still be in my heart
At the end of the day weâll still be apart
At the end of the day my heart will be gone
At the end of the day youâll still go on
At the end of the day Iâll be your past
At the end of the day I wonât be your last
At the end of the day Iâll say good bye
At the end of the day Iâll try not to cry
At the end of the day youâll realize who you dissed
At the end of the day youâll realize who your going to miss
Up the ladder:
anonymous guy
Down the ladder:
Blackened Cauldron
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 1.1428572
Posted: May 28, 2003 10:10 AM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2003 10:10 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.9626546 Overall Rank: 13401 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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28-May-03/11:01 AM
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The word dissed was once, dismissed, try it.
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
> <{Baba^Yaga}>
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28-May-03/1:20 PM
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No it wasn't.
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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28-May-03/3:45 PM
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Yes, it was.
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
> Bachus
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28-May-03/3:57 PM
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I think you'll find it is a contraction of "disrespected".
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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28-May-03/4:02 PM
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Oh, you meant, really. Well, of course James don't be a petty officer third class it's boring.
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
> Shardik
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28-May-03/4:05 PM
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Did you think the phrase "dis[s] and dismiss" meant "dismiss and dismiss"?
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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28-May-03/4:23 PM
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No, did someone you know?
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23
> Shardik
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30-May-03/9:54 AM
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Are you going to admit you were wrong or not? An Gentleman would.
At the end of the day it gets dark
IT IS A VERY NICE POEM.
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