poemranker ::I have nothing left to steal. by lost in america

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Free verse № 42158

I have nothing left to steal.

by lost in america

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Mar 2003 · Edited 7 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

first they kicked in the door the tv was easy, only 13 inches and the boombox, plus three videos. there was nothing much - i was not home. a studio - one room including small kitchen and shared bath. the second time they got the mini fridge, two towels, all the CDs, my clothes, alarm clock. it was the window, everything. garden level.

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4 comments

[n/a] Fear of Garbage 1-Mar-03/7:36 PM Reply
kind of nice...a little sparse
[7] Crakyamuni 3-Mar-03/6:16 PM Reply
Sucks dude- very informative poem though. The comfort of a skateboard can mend you.
[8] Shardik 7-Mar-03/12:05 PM Reply
That's good though. Still not tapping hidden ideas however, but damn fine work.
[3] Caducus 8-Mar-03/3:01 AM Reply
This never really engaged any interest, I am trying to understand the point of even writing it.