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Stars of the sky

by GTK

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

Upon the stars a sky so bright, I look up towared it wih all my might, hoppong to catch a glimpse of heavens light. Looking up on this starry night, I search and search but cannot find, the depth of love within my mind. To find, to control, to inspire, and let me be one with the love inside my heart.

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3 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Jan-03/11:07 AM Reply
This is the BEST, absolute BEST exploration of human themes I've ever read!!!!

Oh wait... actually it's crap.
[n/a] Ranger › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Jan-03/11:33 AM Reply
That was the BEST, absolute BEST exploration of constructive criticism I've ever seen!!!!

Oh wait...actually it's sarcasm.

Quite.
[3] nentwined 26-Jan-03/11:56 AM Reply
ow.