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Stars of the sky (Free verse) by GTK
Upon the stars a sky so bright, I look up towared it wih all my might, hoppong to catch a glimpse of heavens light. Looking up on this starry night, I search and search but cannot find, the depth of love within my mind. To find, to control, to inspire, and let me be one with the love inside my heart.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10457
Posted: January 23, 2003 10:08 AM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2003 10:08 AM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.102 | 23-Jan-03/11:07 AM | Reply
This is the BEST, absolute BEST exploration of human themes I've ever read!!!!

Oh wait... actually it's crap.
[n/a] Ranger @ 213.120.56.37 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 23-Jan-03/11:33 AM | Reply
That was the BEST, absolute BEST exploration of constructive criticism I've ever seen!!!!

Oh wait...actually it's sarcasm.

Quite.
[3] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 26-Jan-03/11:56 AM | Reply
ow.
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