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Stars of the sky (Free verse) by GTK

Upon the stars a sky so bright, I look up towared it wih all my might, hoppong to catch a glimpse of heavens light. Looking up on this starry night, I search and search but cannot find, the depth of love within my mind. To find, to control, to inspire, and let me be one with the love inside my heart.

Ranger 23-Jan-03/11:33 AM
That was the BEST, absolute BEST exploration of constructive criticism I've ever seen!!!!

Oh wait...actually it's sarcasm.

Quite.




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