Re: but i was by nolan	18-Jul-03/4:21 PM
but you weren't?
Re: Mistaken Paradise by DJCARTER	18-Jul-03/4:19 PM
Gramaricaly abandoned.
Re: The Girl Who Is Gone by BuffysBack419	18-Jul-03/4:04 PM
"But she went to there to stay." My friend Vipersna invented this form, you are a thief! Nah, there are some interesting normal reactions to abandonment here, you are not alone, hang on, to this 6.
Re: Nigger Hole by horus8	18-Jul-03/3:26 PM
Must you say that naughty word that has nothing to do with skin color other than 1,ooo's of years of persecution and lies, death, humilty, fear. Because... Even words need to be set free from their sterotypage by generations of unimaginative flesh peddlars.
Re: Paean by Terence	18-Jul-03/3:20 PM
Ahh, isn't that just sweet... now diE! Just kidding.
Re: beyond sences by calilegzzz	18-Jul-03/3:17 PM
At first I was going to glue this to my neighbor's face, but then I enjoyed your finally.
Re: a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom	16-Jul-03/2:03 AM
"There where no pretenses made here" were, Bugger'd. I wont even bother fixing your attempt at spelling 'rhyme'. I can only wonder if god had the same idea when he put you here.
Re: In Loving Memory of Myself by Owner of the Sky	7-Jul-03/11:26 PM
A vibrator and a Von treirs movie might have saved your life.
Re: My Heart's Not Built Like That by Owner of the Sky	7-Jul-03/11:24 PM
Lovely.
Re: Repine by Owner of the Sky	7-Jul-03/11:10 PM
Well, you would know. You own it.
Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	7-Jul-03/10:57 PM
I just read the comments to this poem, and did I ever laugh, good Christ, we are a sad bunch.lol.
Re: On Leaving an Awful Pub Job by razorgrin	7-Jul-03/9:54 PM
That's what I'm saying sweet cheecks.
Re: a comment on Freedom & Then some... by horus8	7-Jul-03/9:51 PM
Supreme Knowledge lived and Sincere understanding died. When I realized that was their names, I thought, jesus, that's fucking profound, I mean really , think about that.
Re: a comment on the godself within by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/4:43 PM
Yes, I feel the same way, but she's starting to stink up the room.
Re: a comment on Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Jul-03/2:02 AM
17 syllables, words don't matter.
Re: Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom	6-Jul-03/10:17 PM
When you fuck up a haiku, they roll out the red carpet. Great Christ in Saucer, abandon ship, he's never seeen an abacus.
Re: a comment on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	6-Jul-03/9:14 PM
Oh, well... I see. Good, well, as for a title it reminded me of the table where they feed you when you're filming a movie on location or at the studio, full of all kinds of naughty goodies. Carry on then, nice poem.
Re: To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	6-Jul-03/9:11 PM
I would call it "Craft's Service" and try not to hang out there through the course of the shoot. (movie lingo)
Re: a comment on The Garden Island by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Jul-03/9:09 PM
It was just the pinapple top, my young crusader, but there are some ants in Africa that can do that, if you're sleeping or drunk, of course.
Re: a comment on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Jul-03/9:07 PM
Thank you, I just may.