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Nigger Hole (Free verse) by horus8 I am so jealous
I stole your avocado
and rear ended your mail man
I am so jealous
of your bravado
I even keyed your mini-van
I am so jealous
of you in a bikini
I rented one too in navy blue
I am so jealous
of your high fashion
You got me begging in J-crew
I am so jealous
of your moustache
And the way that you dismount
I am so jealous
of your flicked ash
I have forgotten how to count
I am so jealous
of your hippie shimmy
I've developed one of my own
I am so jealous
of your hand made beads
that don't be surprised
when I wrap them around
your stupid fat corn fed
neck & drag you a 100 miles
into a golden field in Nebraska
& crucify your raped carcass
with my semen & the mighty
word of sweet lord Satan.
SATAN! SATAN! SATAN!
SATAN! SATAN! SATAN!
SATAN! SATAN! SATAN!
I am so jealous
So very jealous.
And that's why
you must die.
Up the ladder:
Still Low
Down the ladder:
Taurus women and the pride
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 8.090909
Posted: July 9, 2003 2:21 PM PDT; Last modified: July 17, 2003 8:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.5454545 Overall Rank: 651 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.163.153
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10-Jul-03/1:33 AM
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Lovely Tombstone ;D
THIS IS THE BEST POEM YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN
Yes...I know. I have set the keystones of evil.
Thanks...read up on me, eh? ;) *shrugs*...I know I have a lot to learn, I only write every once in a while anymore...and most of the stuff I feel like writing is 'cause I feel miserable with the situation I'm stuck in (job money blah blah blah)...anyways, I won't go on about it. Interesting writing...tired, don't know what else to say...*passes out*
Ah, I probably wouldn't use this on my poetic resume per say, but it's good propaganda. Yeah, I know the feelin'. Anyhow, whenever you feel like talking or want me to help you edit a piece... just let me know, it doesn't have to be Satanic, I was just practicing swinging around my new tail is all.
interesting, if not a little satanic... :) anyway I would give it an eight
This is very clever.
Must you say that naughty word that has nothing to do with skin color other than 1,ooo's of years of persecution and lies, death, humilty, fear. Because... Even words need to be set free from their sterotypage by generations of unimaginative flesh peddlars.
Wow, you are certainly at the peak of your creativity!!!!!!1
A pity the same can't be said of your maturity, Jeremi. Or should I say Jewremi. Jew.
lol, you must have me mistaken for your toothbrush? I am as Jewish as you are a sprinter
But thanks anyway! And good shabbas to you! Please, try to take it easy until sundown, and if you have to drive, put an ice tray under your driver's seat.
Tomorrows my B-day. Will you be writing me an ode?
It set off my turettes...Thankyou.
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