on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl
1 Oct 2003, 9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on I'll Always Remember by NobodyGirl9
1 Oct 2003, 9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on With All My Heart by Tigger8023
1 Oct 2003, 9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~
1 Oct 2003, 9:47 AM
I guess you should kill yourself.
Just kidding.
Just kidding.
on If i go out I'll catch it and see the uglys. by baphomet
30 Sep 2003, 6:54 AM
their should be they're. good use of rhythm.
replying on Pin worms and cake. by baphomet
30 Sep 2003, 6:53 AM
actually, as far as who asked for my opinion, the poster of this poem did. That's why everybody posts here, right? to get the opinions of others. what a dumb thing to ask.
no need to be nasty.
By the way, I checked the profile - said "10th grade"...so I was off by a year or three. Big woop. I pegged the juvenile. and that's OK. We all start somewhere. Kudos to the poster for being brave enough to swim in these waters.
no need to be nasty.
By the way, I checked the profile - said "10th grade"...so I was off by a year or three. Big woop. I pegged the juvenile. and that's OK. We all start somewhere. Kudos to the poster for being brave enough to swim in these waters.
on Just One More Time by KatieKaBoom
29 Sep 2003, 10:59 AM
Is this a sex poem? about getting a rash? poison ivy?
on my cat by itchiwitch
29 Sep 2003, 10:57 AM
EXCELLENT!
on saving myself for marriage by Venus
29 Sep 2003, 10:56 AM
girls do that, so I've heard. never met any like that though.
on Chew your food! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Sep 2003, 10:55 AM
smells like city, I bet.
on Give me beer! by Agemo-Z
29 Sep 2003, 10:54 AM
certainly not MY mom. She's already drunk today.
on The Big Push by Tascobar
29 Sep 2003, 10:53 AM
ahh yeas, a pooping poem.This one's a real stinker.
on Santa Ana, California by bondjedi
29 Sep 2003, 10:52 AM
Jesus is dead. move on.
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on haiku cycle 2 by mudskipper
29 Sep 2003, 10:48 AM
too much blowing...
on haiku cycle 1 by mudskipper
29 Sep 2003, 10:44 AM
down the leg, I bet. :}
on Pin worms and cake. by baphomet
29 Sep 2003, 7:52 AM
weak, forced rhymes, very little substance. sounds juvenile. are you in seventh grade?
replying on body image by http://mulberryfairy
29 Sep 2003, 7:48 AM
Kylie Minoque redid it in the 80's, as did some other pop band with a male singer.