Re: You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl	1-Oct-03/9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: I'll Always Remember by NobodyGirl9	1-Oct-03/9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: With All My Heart by Tigger8023	1-Oct-03/9:50 AM
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: the door by wuying	1-Oct-03/9:48 AM
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Re: ~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~	1-Oct-03/9:47 AM
I guess you should kill yourself. Just kidding.
Re: If i go out I'll catch it and see the uglys. by baphomet	30-Sep-03/6:54 AM
their should be they're. good use of rhythm.
Re: a comment on Pin worms and cake. by baphomet	30-Sep-03/6:53 AM
actually, as far as who asked for my opinion, the poster of this poem did. That's why everybody posts here, right? to get the opinions of others. what a dumb thing to ask. no need to be nasty. By the way, I checked the profile - said "10th grade"...so I was off by a year or three. Big woop. I pegged the juvenile. and that's OK. We all start somewhere. Kudos to the poster for being brave enough to swim in these waters.
Re: Just One More Time by KatieKaBoom	29-Sep-03/10:59 AM
Is this a sex poem? about getting a rash? poison ivy?
Re: my cat by itchiwitch	29-Sep-03/10:57 AM
EXCELLENT!
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	29-Sep-03/10:56 AM
girls do that, so I've heard. never met any like that though.
Re: Chew your food! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	29-Sep-03/10:55 AM
smells like city, I bet.
Re: Give me beer! by Agemo-Z	29-Sep-03/10:54 AM
certainly not MY mom. She's already drunk today.
Re: The Big Push by Tascobar	29-Sep-03/10:53 AM
ahh yeas, a pooping poem.This one's a real stinker.
Re: Santa Ana, California by bondjedi	29-Sep-03/10:52 AM
Jesus is dead. move on.
Re: The Haiku by beakism	29-Sep-03/10:50 AM
People only write haikus about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about people who write haikus who write about shit.
Re: haiku cycle 2 by mudskipper	29-Sep-03/10:48 AM
too much blowing...
Re: haiku cycle 1 by mudskipper	29-Sep-03/10:44 AM
down the leg, I bet. :}
Re: a comment on War Grave by Caducus	29-Sep-03/9:22 AM
Absolutely. nicely done.
Re: Pin worms and cake. by baphomet	29-Sep-03/7:52 AM
weak, forced rhymes, very little substance. sounds juvenile. are you in seventh grade?
Re: a comment on body image by http://mulberryfairy	29-Sep-03/7:48 AM
Kylie Minoque redid it in the 80's, as did some other pop band with a male singer.