poemranker ::~What do I do~ by ~Ashley Baby Girl~

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~What do I do~

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

What do I do when I am in love with someone but I dont know how to tell them. What do I do when I just cant find the right word's to say to someone when they want some help from me on something. what do I do when someones world is falling apart and they want me to make it all better for them. What do I do when someone care about me and I dont care about them. What do I do when I hate someone and they love me. What do I do when I just cant stop thinking about someone when I am with someone else. What do I do when everything is going just great then it all fall's apart.What do I do when I lose the person that I care about most in life. What do I do when I lose the love of my life. What do I do when I just dont know where to run to when I need someone to lean on. What do I do when I just can't live on anymore. What do I do when everything doesnt make any sence anymore. What do I do when I dont have a reason to live anymore. What do I do when everything is just coming down on me and I dont know how to take it anymore. What do I do when someone tell's me that they have a chance to die. What do I do when I can't sleep at night because I am thinking about how I would feel if that person died. What would I do if I lost my mother. What would I do with out her in my life. How would everything be able to go on with out her in my life... Ashley Nicole Shrider April22,2003

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[0] Blindproject217 22-Apr-03/9:14 PM Reply
I feel like that all the time, -0-
[1] hipster flare 1-Oct-03/9:47 AM Reply
I guess you should kill yourself.






Just kidding.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-Oct-03/9:50 AM Reply
I'll tell you what you shouldn't do: write a poeme about it.