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If i go out I'll catch it and see the uglys. (Villanelle) by baphomet
Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. Only one bullet in my pellet gun. I wish I had a man eating blood hound. Their every were, their hunting me down. When will this nightmare ever be done. Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. I’ll be o.k. if I wear my anti-virus gown. I might even get sick from the sun. I wish I had a man eating blood hound. If I stay in the bathroom germ free and sound. Maybe I should go out, it might be fun. Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. I prey to Ala not to be found. Am I crazy over God’s dead son. I wish I had a man eating blood hound. When the time is right I’ll go to the next town. Infectious diseases and viruses are on the run. Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. I wish I had a man eating blood hound.

Down the ladder: Ghost

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.9
Overall Rank: 1458
Posted: September 28, 2003 2:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 28, 2003 2:37 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.71 | 28-Sep-03/5:02 PM | Reply
Perhaps it might interest you to know that I have rabies.
[n/a] grendal @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 28-Sep-03/6:34 PM | Reply
you must be burnt at the stake.
[8] hipster flare @ 209.68.66.187 | 30-Sep-03/6:54 AM | Reply
their should be they're. good use of rhythm.
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