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If i go out I'll catch it and see the uglys. (Villanelle) by baphomet

Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. Only one bullet in my pellet gun. I wish I had a man eating blood hound. Their every were, their hunting me down. When will this nightmare ever be done. Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. I’ll be o.k. if I wear my anti-virus gown. I might even get sick from the sun. I wish I had a man eating blood hound. If I stay in the bathroom germ free and sound. Maybe I should go out, it might be fun. Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. I prey to Ala not to be found. Am I crazy over God’s dead son. I wish I had a man eating blood hound. When the time is right I’ll go to the next town. Infectious diseases and viruses are on the run. Annoying simpletons of Nimrod all around. I wish I had a man eating blood hound.

hipster flare 30-Sep-03/6:54 AM
their should be they're. good use of rhythm.




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