replying on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria
10 Mar 2004, 11:32 AM
Loads of people have problems. Find a focus--like really writing good poems. You can be emotional without being immature. Look for beauty in your situation and write about that.
on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria
10 Mar 2004, 11:30 AM
This is a place to share poetry and get feedback, not a place to voice your teenage problems that seem so big to you now. Get a counselor or something.
on I have no problem with short people of color or religion by horus8
30 Oct 2003, 6:48 AM
an excellent social commentary.
on John Denver's hang-glider by horus8
30 Oct 2003, 6:11 AM
An excellent Poem (But I do believe it is "Hang" Glider)
It reminded me of a thing I read in a book somewhere--where a man was about to drown and was rescued at the last moment. He was upset because he finally was about to find out what it feels like to be a drowning man, and he was now robbed of that experience.
It reminded me of a thing I read in a book somewhere--where a man was about to drown and was rescued at the last moment. He was upset because he finally was about to find out what it feels like to be a drowning man, and he was now robbed of that experience.
on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend
24 Oct 2003, 9:19 AM
nicely done
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Jingoism saved the wingnut by horus8
1 Oct 2003, 11:31 AM
cowboys are nifty.
on Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL
1 Oct 2003, 10:02 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Every single days's the same (Acrostic) by [mojo]
1 Oct 2003, 9:57 AM
is acrostic concrete?
on Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey
1 Oct 2003, 9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on this tuesday morning by teacup
1 Oct 2003, 9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Was/Were You? by Alyssa91
1 Oct 2003, 9:56 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
This is a dumb poem. Sorry.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
This is a dumb poem. Sorry.
on Answered Prayers by Pooh_N_His_Honey
1 Oct 2003, 9:55 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties by Luzr
1 Oct 2003, 9:55 AM
a boat? I like it.
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me by EggbertShootsFire
1 Oct 2003, 9:54 AM
A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.
on suicide weather and dreary imaginings do no good by xanthippe
1 Oct 2003, 9:53 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism
1 Oct 2003, 9:52 AM
too bad about hating penises. they can be quite fun.
on Tate Street 1956 by wunboi
1 Oct 2003, 9:51 AM
Oh yeah, that's concrete. looks like a jagged edged something.
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
1 Oct 2003, 9:51 AM
Has potential. work on the form.