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suicide weather and dreary imaginings do no good (Concrete) by xanthippe
frozen bridges give iffy security
still rivers slow down birthing baracudas
snow plathered hills threaten your shelter
and the sun shows no sign
of ever returning.
sunlight heat reflecting hard concrete offers no shade
drought-dead dehydrated trees cannot give backing
overheating grunting enginecars bring no relief
and the stars have not been out in years.
sandbagged grey peopled walls can't stand attention
coastline building utopias have no chance
house made of glass, now looking like an ass
and the storm is gaining strength.
minds in comfortable complacency wobble
faith in stability won't stop the change
possessions dissipate like one's own self-respect
and the world destroyed, perhaps ever resurrected.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4166665
Weighted score: 4.5735493
Overall Rank: 12604
Posted: December 28, 2002 12:00 AM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2002 12:00 AM PST
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