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The Big Push (Haiku) by Tascobar Bloated, over-ripe
Strain, then satisfying splash
Mission successful
Up the ladder:
13 Pianos (after Wallace Stevens)
Down the ladder:
'The Grey' Triplet
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: August 16, 2002 3:17 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 3:17 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.25 Overall Rank: 4005 Comments:
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deleted user @ 167.206.181.179
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16-Aug-02/6:35 AM
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brilliant. how many "poems" can people write about farting and shitting?
several... But alas the Foul Constipat-Or has unleashed his tentacles upon my brave buttocks! What!? Will this turd ne'er be ripe? The shame! Forgive me Lord Jesu! Forgive me!
i would just like to say brilliant poem.
A very successful Haiku. 8. A delightful choice of words make the 'bog' standard subject matter rise above the 'crap'. Vivid and concise, with a beautiful summation to close.
ahh yeas, a pooping poem.This one's a real stinker.
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