The Big Push

by Tascobar

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Aug 2002 · 5 comments

Bloated, over-ripe Strain, then satisfying splash Mission successful

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5 comments

[1] deleted user 16-Aug-02/6:35 AM Reply

brilliant. how many "poems" can people write about farting and shitting?

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Aug-02/7:51 AM Reply

several... But alas the Foul Constipat-Or has unleashed his tentacles upon my brave buttocks! What!? Will this turd ne'er be ripe? The shame! Forgive me Lord Jesu! Forgive me!

[9] youngweirdo 17-Aug-02/5:22 PM Reply

i would just like to say brilliant poem.

[8] Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/1:37 PM Reply

A very successful Haiku. 8. A delightful choice of words make the 'bog' standard subject matter rise above the 'crap'. Vivid and concise, with a beautiful summation to close.

[7] hipster flare 29-Sep-03/10:53 AM Reply

ahh yeas, a pooping poem.This one's a real stinker.