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The Big Push (Haiku) by Tascobar

Bloated, over-ripe Strain, then satisfying splash Mission successful

Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/1:37 PM
A very successful Haiku. 8. A delightful choice of words make the 'bog' standard subject matter rise above the 'crap'. Vivid and concise, with a beautiful summation to close.




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