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the door (Concrete) by wuying
In front of me, a door to no where lies
what lurked behind it, no one really knew.
A door that shivers, shudders, groans, and dies.
It is a sad worn door of standard size
about eight one or is it maybe two?
A door that never speaks although it tries.
It is a still observer, for with eyes
it sees a person's soul no matter who.
The closer that I come I realize.
It was a door, no more, as time still flies
a thousand people passed as time still flew.
But they choose not to listen to its cries.
I longed to venture in - but was it wise??
and torn in two, I knew not what to do.
A step to cross the threshold broke my ties.
I entered thru and to my great surprise,
at last I understood that which was true.
Behind me now, a door to no where lies.
A door that shivers, shudders, groans, and dies.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3
Weighted score: 4.65
Overall Rank: 12295
Posted: August 14, 2002 9:37 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2002 9:37 PM PDT
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