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the door (Concrete) by wuying

In front of me, a door to no where lies what lurked behind it, no one really knew. A door that shivers, shudders, groans, and dies. It is a sad worn door of standard size about eight one or is it maybe two? A door that never speaks although it tries. It is a still observer, for with eyes it sees a person's soul no matter who. The closer that I come I realize. It was a door, no more, as time still flies a thousand people passed as time still flew. But they choose not to listen to its cries. I longed to venture in - but was it wise?? and torn in two, I knew not what to do. A step to cross the threshold broke my ties. I entered thru and to my great surprise, at last I understood that which was true. Behind me now, a door to no where lies. A door that shivers, shudders, groans, and dies.

wuying 14-Aug-02/9:48 PM
well, since i am still on here, i can supply a prompt response.
thanks for the comment - the door pretty much signifies any obstacle=great decision=anguish that is found in life. undeniably it is everpresent in form and form again, in being that there is no sidestepping it and everyone must either face up to their own difficulties, or forever remain in fear about it, of not knowing, etc.
and daunting as it is, the relative truth about the matter will not be revealed out until the treshold is traversed. hindsight being 20/20 and all that.
ok if i explain anymore i'm going to feel like an idiot.




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