| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
With All My Heart (Concrete) by Tigger8023 I met you some time ago
Ever since then I've loved you, so
You're everything I'll ever need
You've made me see things I didn't see
I love being in your embrace
And gazing at your beautiful face
Your kisses, so soft, your touch, so real
True love for you is all I feel
You make me smile when I have a bad day
You chase all my bad thoughts away
You're the person who holds the key to my heart
I pray each day that we will never part
My love for you will always be alive
Never will I doubt or will my feelings die
I promise to always be faithful and true
For with all my heart... I Love You!
Up the ladder:
Make Me A pie
Down the ladder:
Inquietude
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.230769
Posted: November 27, 2002 7:25 PM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 7:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.4376473 Overall Rank: 12919 Comments:
[2]
hipster flare @ 209.68.74.214
|
1-Oct-03/9:50 AM
|
Reply
Oh yeah, that's concerete. looks like a jagged edged something.
Good going.... I love rhyming verse. Still, in real life are you as dedicated as you pen down. Would really make a difference to your world.
Am not good at reviewing. Am new to this field, and don't really know what to look for in a poem or poet's expressions. All the same I liked it.
Good going.... I love rhyming verse. Still, in real life are you as dedicated as you pen down. Would really make a difference to your world.
Am not good at reviewing. Am new to this field, and don't really know what to look for in a poem or poet's expressions. All the same I liked it. 135 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
