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With All My Heart (Concrete) by Tigger8023

I met you some time ago Ever since then I've loved you, so You're everything I'll ever need You've made me see things I didn't see I love being in your embrace And gazing at your beautiful face Your kisses, so soft, your touch, so real True love for you is all I feel You make me smile when I have a bad day You chase all my bad thoughts away You're the person who holds the key to my heart I pray each day that we will never part My love for you will always be alive Never will I doubt or will my feelings die I promise to always be faithful and true For with all my heart... I Love You!

amanda_dcosta 13-Dec-05/8:30 PM
Good going.... I love rhyming verse. Still, in real life are you as dedicated as you pen down. Would really make a difference to your world.
Am not good at reviewing. Am new to this field, and don't really know what to look for in a poem or poet's expressions. All the same I liked it.




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