Re: A Sea by Ellie95	8-Mar-03/11:07 AM
destruction.
Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones	8-Mar-03/11:05 AM
Alexander never asked he just went. The turks are so broke it'll be close, but this idiot will do it anyway. Nostrodamus told me so.
Re: Cussedness by Nicholas Jones	8-Mar-03/11:02 AM
Lordy, Lordy... Remember Gordy? from stand by me?
Re: Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95	8-Mar-03/10:59 AM
I am the sexiest nude warlock to date. here let me try an edit down the cat walk. watch this. Blackened Cauldron (Free verse) by Ellie95 With spells of evil. The turbulant chantings of the end whisper to my heaving bones. as if an evil witch stirs my gutt from within her black cauldron, No rest can I find with this turbulance inside. No peace I gather from the Evil The dark witch controls me. I know this deep in my soul.
Re: a comment on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	7-Mar-03/11:30 PM
Frozen justification? I didn't know they wired the mammoth to talk? Interesting. You ever see Ringo Starr in that Caveman movie? Funny shite, mang.
Re: a comment on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	7-Mar-03/11:26 PM
Sir, are you mad dogging the mob? Perhaps i am conducting an experiment. What if i said part of me likes this poem, and part of me hates it. The good news is the best comment you got was from da. your problem is right there. In other words, the style and structure is completely gauche, and artisticaly 'safe' Either go total concrete, or make the structure serve your words and story here, because that's where the good shit is. Here's a ten. Now Skiddadal. I never said you had to like anything. I'm just messing around with new theories of and within communication, lacking audio, and visual identification upon a computer. This was only a test.
Re: Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik	7-Mar-03/11:17 PM
Oh Shardik... You trap baiter you. Must your mind live at the Cirkle K Try Chapstick from my ass You know? I just love Oprah. Want a Chocodile?
Re: Unholy War by marvelis	7-Mar-03/9:52 PM
I never knew there was a holy war?
Re: a comment on The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus	7-Mar-03/9:27 PM
Yes, I know. It troubles me too. We should do something about it! You know? Clean up this filthy town... Whatta yeah say? I hear this scoundrel Bachus has gone mad... Apparently with a kale gun at the private school. In the private boys shavery. We can only hope they're all not vegetarian pussys. Coming up with off the cuff degeneratively rude chirpings like that. The nerve. All over my chesapeke chaps and scarf. Mother fuckers. We don't need no stinking badges. Hey lets count this. It could be a 69 er!c
Re: As the Redwood Ages by DurtKL	7-Mar-03/10:03 AM
Dry semen, i feel, works much better then name dropping, or cornholing deities that simply just do not play a role any longer in our well being. God does not talk. No-doz? don't punk out, just take the real thing. your imagery here, though fastly sought out i'm sure through hours of sleepless research. was like eating a mouthful of jelly beans, with meatloaf, and champagne while listening to Gobi desert sound bites on lsd and then sand papering ones elbows. Great job. 7.
Re: a comment on Aries, the God of war by Shardik	7-Mar-03/9:48 AM
it's a hoofed spin i invented off of heaving. a mixed word between hovering, hove, hoof, and heaved. past and past part of heave, but now in the present, to be heaving in an uncertain state, a hybrid word. one word out of twelve? i hardly call that masking now mr. foster. i believe it set's up the fear of war when going into it's cousin word upon the page, census.
Re: just as we were by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:18 AM
"meagre" other then that little glitch which practically works well enough any way. Great poem!
Re: Sofia by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:15 AM
Really lovely. 10!
Re: No Sense by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:12 AM
Afterword 1 (Free verse) by daniella He slides his step to the side, and a heart skips its beating. Like a bird lying lame on the wet winter hour of dawn. Like no approach he comes, like a tongue withdrawn. No sense, no truth, no arms to hold on. On a mission of mercy up over. The newest light is mounting up to correct the marks left for another. Try that.
Re: Anouk by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:08 AM
Charming.
Re: Death From Above by Jimbo	6-Mar-03/8:54 PM
a bit long, but quality. I could edit a version of this for you.
Re: a comment on Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow	6-Mar-03/12:24 AM
That's his way of keeping you from talking to his ass, decent poem by the way. A bit session nine, but so were the jetson's right? 8.
Re: a comment on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Mar-03/12:13 AM
_O |_ (*)\_ + hatred divided by love makes jack a dull boy.
Re: a comment on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Mar-03/12:05 AM
Tsk... You have clearly been bested kind sir. A gentlemen does not soil anothers hankerchief when he has a cold and leaky parson's nose. He waits to diddle the help on the way out, and snout kick his prize hunting hound. You are clearly out of line, and I demand satasfaction! ` -/ 0 ` .. (-)(-)::1::2::3::4::5::6::7::8::9]=}------_/\_ Thanks, from my chair to yours.
Re: The Fire Giver by OneFingerAnswer	5-Mar-03/3:29 PM
Yes. "I'm glad you metioned the content because I want to get that out of the way early. This isn't about God and Satan as dieties or religious figures. Rather it's about "good" and "bad." One way I was taking it was the idea that good behavior doesn't attract much attention. I actually had one of my classmates from highschool in mind. He was a "good kid" and all through high school he was B/C average. Three days before graduation he ran himself into a tree in the car his parents had bought him as a graduation present. He lived through it even though he hadn't meant to. When I asked him why he did it he said "To be remembered." To be honest, I think it worked." by the way this is profound, thanks, i understand now. Sorry about earlier my brain is acting up again.