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Text Messages Sent (Free verse) by blueENDyellow
unfortunately people die every day friends may not but some just may and every time that they will die it's like blood drops from the sky run onto the street just to find the right kind of person that you will kill dressed to kill and ready to make love black dress shirt and deep red tie time flies when she's got a perfect mind little do they know someone's eye is on them tonight and this one is the darkest of them all program this night to spill blood on the floor kitchen lights blink...and blink too scared to watch, the bright eyes turn themselves off for they don't care to watch a bloody mess streak across the tiles smeared across the counter dripping to the ground one would think blood is an art that's hard to find too little to nothing to see it splattered across a room well this date's over and this month has ended knew the image of an empty year would show up in the negatives now onto better and into another this image reminds me of why i am nothing the remarks and comments make me feel dark and unpleasant sew this mouth

Up the ladder: outside my reach
Down the ladder: Pushed Aside

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10515
Posted: March 5, 2003 9:27 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 9:27 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 5-Mar-03/9:43 PM | Reply
Oh, real classy, deleting comments. IS THAT HOW YOU GO THROUGH LIFE? SIMPLY DELETING THE PEOPLE WHO GET IN YOUR WAY?
[n/a] blueENDyellow @ 67.40.112.170 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 5-Mar-03/9:52 PM | Reply
i didn't even know what i was doing
i clicked on reply
i guess i must've clicked on the x instead
sorry dude
so why are you so mad
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > blueENDyellow | 5-Mar-03/9:59 PM | Reply
Sure man. Whatever. If you want to lie to me, that's fine. Heck, you can even lie to yourself. But don't think for one minute you can hide the truth from Jesu. For that...

For that, you will require an Isolation Boothe.
[n/a] blueENDyellow @ 67.40.112.170 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 5-Mar-03/10:12 PM | Reply
haha
you're a weird one
but you didn't answer my question
why'd you start off saying the things you said
btw...i don't lie
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > blueENDyellow | 5-Mar-03/10:16 PM | Reply
Talk to the hand, man. Talk to the hand, because I am through with your punk ass.
[n/a] blueENDyellow @ 67.40.112.170 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 5-Mar-03/10:25 PM | Reply
i can't even see you so how am i supposed to talk to your hand
and i do like some punk music
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > blueENDyellow | 6-Mar-03/12:24 AM | Reply
That's his way of keeping you from talking to his ass, decent poem by the way. A bit session nine, but so were the jetson's right? 8.
[n/a] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 > blueENDyellow | 6-Mar-03/3:51 AM | Reply
Don't worry about anything DA says. He's kind of this site's Tajiri. I'm sure you know what I mean.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > OneFingerAnswer | 7-Mar-03/12:48 AM | Reply
THE WORST ONES ARE THE SMUG ONES
[n/a] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 11-Mar-03/2:16 AM | Reply
Idiots are far worse then the smug ones. So are people who use caps lock. Then again I think those are covered in the category of idiots. A smug idiot maybe the worst of them all.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > OneFingerAnswer | 11-Mar-03/10:05 AM | Reply
ahahahahaahahahaha
[0] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 6-Mar-03/12:00 PM | Reply
how does this have anything to do with text messages?
[7] Sapphire2589 @ 63.157.12.16 | 20-Mar-04/12:12 AM | Reply
*shudders* that was creepy,nice write though,it could have flowed better though
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