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Text Messages Sent (Free verse) by blueENDyellow
unfortunately people die every day
friends may not but some just may
and every time that they will die
it's like blood drops from the sky
run onto the street just to find
the right kind of person that you will kill
dressed to kill and ready to make love
black dress shirt and deep red tie
time flies when she's got a perfect mind
little do they know
someone's eye is on them tonight
and this one is the darkest of them all
program this night to spill blood on the floor
kitchen lights blink...and blink
too scared to watch, the bright eyes turn themselves off
for they don't care to watch a bloody mess streak across the tiles
smeared across the counter dripping to the ground
one would think blood is an art that's hard to find
too little to nothing to see it splattered across a room
well this date's over
and this month has ended
knew the image of an empty year would show up in the negatives
now onto better
and into another
this image reminds me of why i am nothing
the remarks and comments make me feel dark and unpleasant
sew this mouth
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10521
Posted: March 5, 2003 9:27 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 9:27 PM PST
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i clicked on reply
i guess i must've clicked on the x instead
sorry dude
so why are you so mad
For that, you will require an Isolation Boothe.
you're a weird one
but you didn't answer my question
why'd you start off saying the things you said
btw...i don't lie
and i do like some punk music