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unfortunately people die every day friends may not but some just may and every time that they will die it's like blood drops from the sky run onto the street just to find the right kind of person that you will kill dressed to kill and ready to make love black dress shirt and deep red tie time flies when she's got a perfect mind little do they know someone's eye is on them tonight and this one is the darkest of them all program this night to spill blood on the floor kitchen lights blink...and blink too scared to watch, the bright eyes turn themselves off for they don't care to watch a bloody mess streak across the tiles smeared across the counter dripping to the ground one would think blood is an art that's hard to find too little to nothing to see it splattered across a room well this date's over and this month has ended knew the image of an empty year would show up in the negatives now onto better and into another this image reminds me of why i am nothing the remarks and comments make me feel dark and unpleasant sew this mouth

blueENDyellow 5-Mar-03/9:52 PM
i didn't even know what i was doing
i clicked on reply
i guess i must've clicked on the x instead
sorry dude
so why are you so mad




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