poemranker ::20 most recent comments by horus8 (1741-1760) and replies

Comments byhorus8, 1741–1760 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on our little secret by famenglory 12 Mar 2003, 1:55 AM
if you weren't crippled and counting herpes i'd stick your fucking organ up your ass without your trusty shoehorn james. 4 wheeldrive is better then two.
replying on Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8 12 Mar 2003, 1:50 AM
Jealousy + nudity = sophia Loren perching headfirst above my pounding shaft.
Somethings are possible.
Dream a little dream to earn your jealous scream.
I have some butterfly stitches you could model ricky.
Yeah idiot, i think that's pretty much what the poem said smart guy!
on Family Portrait by Mr Pig 11 Mar 2003, 1:17 PM
"Dad would walk in a talcum cloud," great line.

I would end this not "And smile!" but

Smile

that's why your not grabbing the tens.8.
High yeildings in pharmaceudicals?
on The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw 11 Mar 2003, 1:07 PM
Your ability to name drop is profound, but your poetry aint.
on The Poet by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 8:59 PM
See this is more your speed a little counter culture jazz baby, yeah diggit.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/thesalesman.mp3
on The Poet by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 8:54 PM
It was great up until the last line.

You weren't suppose to delete the poem (fetus) Brandon. You were suppose to debate the opinion of felled fetus' everywhere and why they matter too. That is what a poet would have done, and also; he or she would not of erased it. Because then i would of told you a secret, and you would of went ohhhhhhhhhh, and we would have been friends. Forever. P.s. the activity above seems strange for a male model. It sound more like something a teacher would write. You lied to me professor, shame on you! I'm sure she was hot when she was younger though and still is. What makes you think i don't like old people?
replying on My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik 9 Mar 2003, 8:38 PM
"You sound like a beaver being
gang raped."

Now that is a sound that i'm sure you hear often. Nice metaphor much more believable then say an "evil curved breast".

Could i sound like Sophia loren getting gangraped by the golden girls next time? God i sure hope so. THankyou! Yor constant flattery is making me blush kind sir. An iq of 54? I don't recall my website disclosing that most sought after of misconceptions(i actually have no iq, truly, just a void) I really had no idea i was setting out to try to impress you, by what? saying you suck? Yes, that must of gave you the idea. Must I shoo> Can't i just whisper once more real sweet..........furke you?
"unicorns in the forest" but this is clearly a sign of a child hood molesting repressed into faiery tale symbolism. (i forget this one on my earlier list) i do like this poem though... it tastes like granola but has the texture of caviar? interesting.
This poem is clearly about seperatism, and how to fight against the evil with in one's sole

"toilets overflow"
"Jackson Pollock"
"roll a blunt"
"Josef Stalin"
"cauldron"
"shepherd's lithium"
"How dare you claim me mad!"

All quotes proving my point.

Thank you folks, i'm here all night too.
replying on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 8:11 PM
I am everyone that you're not, and yes I'm quite mad. Cheers!
replying on My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik 9 Mar 2003, 8:03 PM
Yes, Sir! Let me get right on that. Right after I smoke your old ladies clitoris.
replying on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 7:46 PM
You should publish your work at Iwrotethreehundredpoems.com
they have an excellent roster, and
I hear Sophia Loren has a web site called A100yearoldwoptightvulvathatreadspoetry.com

Both extremely exclusive.

On FRiday I'm having a BBQ for male models at my home (in the garden of course) WE are going to start a botanical workshop and a knitting class, would you like to come? RSVP only. I heard my buddy John Francis is coming. I could let you sit on his lap if you'd like. No girls are invited though, so leave sophie at home. Thanks.

Seriously though you can pee farther it's cool. I simply said that i was not fat, and that your fetus poem sucked. this poem above aint half bad though, a little overkill, but what the hell. here's a 6. good luck on your next threehundred chip.
replying on Fireworks on the Island by horus8 9 Mar 2003, 9:48 AM
true story.
blasphemy.
on A Sea by Ellie95 8 Mar 2003, 11:07 AM
destruction.
on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones 8 Mar 2003, 11:05 AM
Alexander never asked he just went. The turks are so broke it'll be close, but this idiot will do it anyway. Nostrodamus told me so.
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones 8 Mar 2003, 11:02 AM
Lordy, Lordy... Remember Gordy? from stand by me?
on Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95 8 Mar 2003, 10:59 AM
I am the sexiest nude warlock to date.
here let me try an edit down the cat walk.
watch this.

Blackened Cauldron (Free verse) by Ellie95

With spells of evil.

The turbulant chantings of the
end whisper to my heaving bones.
as if an evil witch stirs my gutt
from within her black cauldron,

No rest can I find with this
turbulance inside.
No peace I gather from the Evil
The dark witch controls me.

I know this deep in my soul.