| Re: a comment on Threnody by Nanshe |
12-Mar-03/2:08 AM |
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Yeah, you're Jeremi? Why would your parent's give you a name you could never live up to? Because you paint and you drink gay frothy urine by choice, money or not.
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| Re: a comment on A Tale of Peter Pan by NewbieMe |
12-Mar-03/2:04 AM |
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If you composed music like you write limericks... You'd still suck.
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| Re: Goin? Down Baby by Drummer |
12-Mar-03/2:01 AM |
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yes, shit don't mean shit.
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| Re: Saline drip to the eye by INTRANSIT |
12-Mar-03/1:58 AM |
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| Re: our little secret by famenglory |
12-Mar-03/1:55 AM |
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if you weren't crippled and counting herpes i'd stick your fucking organ up your ass without your trusty shoehorn james. 4 wheeldrive is better then two.
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| Re: a comment on Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/1:50 AM |
Jealousy + nudity = sophia Loren perching headfirst above my pounding shaft.
Somethings are possible.
Dream a little dream to earn your jealous scream.
I have some butterfly stitches you could model ricky.
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| Re: a comment on Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8 |
12-Mar-03/1:44 AM |
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Yeah idiot, i think that's pretty much what the poem said smart guy!
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| Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig |
11-Mar-03/1:17 PM |
"Dad would walk in a talcum cloud," great line.
I would end this not "And smile!" but
Smile
that's why your not grabbing the tens.8.
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| Re: good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit |
11-Mar-03/1:11 PM |
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High yeildings in pharmaceudicals?
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| Re: The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw |
11-Mar-03/1:07 PM |
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Your ability to name drop is profound, but your poetry aint.
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| Re: The Poet by wLeBlancw |
9-Mar-03/8:59 PM |
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| Re: The Poet by wLeBlancw |
9-Mar-03/8:54 PM |
It was great up until the last line.
You weren't suppose to delete the poem (fetus) Brandon. You were suppose to debate the opinion of felled fetus' everywhere and why they matter too. That is what a poet would have done, and also; he or she would not of erased it. Because then i would of told you a secret, and you would of went ohhhhhhhhhh, and we would have been friends. Forever. P.s. the activity above seems strange for a male model. It sound more like something a teacher would write. You lied to me professor, shame on you! I'm sure she was hot when she was younger though and still is. What makes you think i don't like old people?
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| Re: a comment on My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik |
9-Mar-03/8:38 PM |
"You sound like a beaver being
gang raped."
Now that is a sound that i'm sure you hear often. Nice metaphor much more believable then say an "evil curved breast".
Could i sound like Sophia loren getting gangraped by the golden girls next time? God i sure hope so. THankyou! Yor constant flattery is making me blush kind sir. An iq of 54? I don't recall my website disclosing that most sought after of misconceptions(i actually have no iq, truly, just a void) I really had no idea i was setting out to try to impress you, by what? saying you suck? Yes, that must of gave you the idea. Must I shoo> Can't i just whisper once more real sweet..........furke you?
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| Re: Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw |
9-Mar-03/8:23 PM |
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"unicorns in the forest" but this is clearly a sign of a child hood molesting repressed into faiery tale symbolism. (i forget this one on my earlier list) i do like this poem though... it tastes like granola but has the texture of caviar? interesting.
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| Re: Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw |
9-Mar-03/8:19 PM |
This poem is clearly about seperatism, and how to fight against the evil with in one's sole
"toilets overflow"
"Jackson Pollock"
"roll a blunt"
"Josef Stalin"
"cauldron"
"shepherd's lithium"
"How dare you claim me mad!"
All quotes proving my point.
Thank you folks, i'm here all night too.
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| Re: a comment on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw |
9-Mar-03/8:11 PM |
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I am everyone that you're not, and yes I'm quite mad. Cheers!
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| Re: a comment on My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik |
9-Mar-03/8:03 PM |
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Yes, Sir! Let me get right on that. Right after I smoke your old ladies clitoris.
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| Re: a comment on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw |
9-Mar-03/7:46 PM |
You should publish your work at Iwrotethreehundredpoems.com
they have an excellent roster, and
I hear Sophia Loren has a web site called A100yearoldwoptightvulvathatreadspoetry.com
Both extremely exclusive.
On FRiday I'm having a BBQ for male models at my home (in the garden of course) WE are going to start a botanical workshop and a knitting class, would you like to come? RSVP only. I heard my buddy John Francis is coming. I could let you sit on his lap if you'd like. No girls are invited though, so leave sophie at home. Thanks.
Seriously though you can pee farther it's cool. I simply said that i was not fat, and that your fetus poem sucked. this poem above aint half bad though, a little overkill, but what the hell. here's a 6. good luck on your next threehundred chip.
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| Re: a comment on Fireworks on the Island by horus8 |
9-Mar-03/9:48 AM |
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| Re: The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus |
8-Mar-03/11:08 AM |
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