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The deafening silence in the world or something (Other) by Bachus
Both hands in the Bush. Two feet on Uranus. Hewey Louis and the News. Duran Duran. Arcadia. John Taylor is the devil. It's a reflex. Depeche mode rocks. I love the Smiths, and you know who. Hungry like a wolf. The Ebola virus is fifteen years from decimating the population of this planet by two thirds. "Words are very unnecesary, they can only do harm."
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Overall Rank: 4427
Posted: March 7, 2003 2:46 PM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2003 2:46 PM PST
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[0] lost in america @ 65.100.176.196 | 7-Mar-03/2:50 PM | Reply
It is pretty bad when you have to end you work with a quote from a song.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > lost in america | 7-Mar-03/2:53 PM | Reply
Whatever helps you sleep at night fuck face.
[0] lost in america @ 65.100.176.196 > Bachus | 7-Mar-03/3:07 PM | Reply
I am not sure what this means, but this site is filled with all sorts of friendly folks that cannot seem to take a ranking or any sort of criticism. It is just my opinion. Lighten up and try to avoid the profanity, please. I realsie you are trying to make a political state, but it is rather ineffective and severely tainted by the fact that you rely on Depeche (sp?) Mode to achieve a political counter point.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > lost in america | 7-Mar-03/9:27 PM | Reply
Yes, I know. It troubles me too. We should do something about it! You know? Clean up this filthy town... Whatta yeah say? I hear this scoundrel Bachus has gone mad... Apparently with a kale gun at the private school. In the private boys shavery. We can only hope they're all not vegetarian pussys. Coming up with off the cuff degeneratively rude chirpings like that. The nerve. All over my chesapeke chaps and scarf. Mother fuckers. We don't need no stinking badges.

Hey lets count this.
It could be a 69 er!c
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > lost in america | 17-Mar-03/10:54 AM | Reply
Can i ask you what the ebola virus and depeche mode has to do with political statements? Not a fucking thing. lol. Nor was that the intention. You are lost in america. This poem is about dying with style, now why don't you hurry along and find some style of your own at the public library down the block.
[1] [mojo] @ 195.92.194.13 | 7-Mar-03/4:28 PM | Reply
Straight over my head.1.
[10] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.106 | 7-Mar-03/4:46 PM | Reply
Maybe, Someday, Saved by zero.
[10] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 7-Mar-03/6:57 PM | Reply
you superstar
under par
jamie farr
corca colar
one night spent in zanzibar
thats whut this generation needs.

i fuckinsuck. hypercrit me.

Iron maiden rocks the third world.
here's ten cents for a new tent, sven.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Mar-03/11:08 AM | Reply
blasphemy.
[10] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.49 | 17-Mar-03/11:22 AM | Reply
Depeche mode is fucking awesome.
[4] RealmOfSong @ 64.254.42.191 | 10-Jun-03/11:30 AM | Reply
that was odd... quite odd indeed...
[n/a] deleted user @ 81.91.144.8 | 12-Jun-03/12:37 AM | Reply
to me,it seems like a brainstorming, but i liked the style.
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