|
|
fashion sense (Free verse) by crin
a garden of light
you gave me quite a fright
hanging so high
from the
limbs of a tree
with a pyramid eye
to lead the blind
above your head
with your spear of destiny
clutched to your chest
darling where was your
fashion sense
you were a dove
eating raw meat
laughing so loud
so
proud of your deceit
with a little devil in your mouth
to polish your
teeth
everytime you smiled
with a million christians
ready to walk a
mile
in your shoes
darling where was your fashion sense
a cardboard
heart
taped to your sleeve
you convinced us all
that it could bleed
with
soft words
and the right inflections
you were such perfection
you still
give all the boys erections
darling what happened
to your fashion sense
looks like you realized you never needed it
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
1 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 0 |
8 |
|
2 | 0 |
7 |
|
4 | 2 |
6 |
|
1 | 0 |
5 |
|
1 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 1 |
3 |
|
0 | 3 |
2 |
|
0 | 1 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
0 | 2 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 5.2222223
Weighted score: 5.2116833
Overall Rank: 4426
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST
View voting details
Comments:
230 view(s)
|