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Before I Go Insane (Free verse) by forsaken
Before I Go Insane
Category: Writing and Poetry
I lay bleeding on my floor
Collapsed on the way through the door
I entered a new world today
But still fimilar in some way
It's like I've been here long ago
Will I ever escape this life I know
I give all I have to make you smile
But like voulteer the bodies pile
Cause all you people do is feed on the kind
Leave me be I have enough problems with my mind
I see creatures drilling holes in my chest
Would I be better off laid to rest
It's as if they're trying to get to my heart
They laugh as my body is torn apart
They're gone in flash but the pain remains
My God can anyone help me before I go insane
I've yet to figure it all out
All I hear is the sound of an angel shout
Her wings have been torn off
Blood on her hands from when she coths
There's something in her eating her insides
I love my angel but at the cost of my pride
Suicdal thoughts run wild as the night
Drives terror in my mind causing me to fight
With what I thought was real
And how in my heart I feel
Slowly my heart turns black as coal
Never again will I know what it's like to be whole
Scarred like the prom queen no one sees
When will the screaming stop inside of me
Echos rattling throughout my brain
My god can anyone help me before I go insane
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.5
Weighted score: 5.2134166
Overall Rank: 4423
Posted: June 18, 2009 10:24 PM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2009 10:24 PM PDT
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