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fashion sense (Free verse) by crin

a garden of light you gave me quite a fright hanging so high from the limbs of a tree with a pyramid eye to lead the blind above your head with your spear of destiny clutched to your chest darling where was your fashion sense you were a dove eating raw meat laughing so loud so proud of your deceit with a little devil in your mouth to polish your teeth everytime you smiled with a million christians ready to walk a mile in your shoes darling where was your fashion sense a cardboard heart taped to your sleeve you convinced us all that it could bleed with soft words and the right inflections you were such perfection you still give all the boys erections darling what happened to your fashion sense looks like you realized you never needed it

anonymous 14-May-02/7:14 AM
it's like you're trying to be something......some sort of profound something... but it only comes off as laughable.




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