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good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 (Free verse) by poetandknowit last night I had this dream
we made love
passionate, rough
porno movie love
once
or maybe twice
maybe three times
and then like nothing
a crocodile slashed your head off.
Up the ladder:
How much?
Down the ladder:
silence of the sky
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Posted: August 12, 2002 10:39 AM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2002 12:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7494 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.108.237
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12-Aug-02/3:22 PM
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This is fantastic! I giggle!
good surrealism.
I wouldn't call it high art. But that crocodile... man, I love that crocodile.
i hate when crocodiles come out of nowhere...but this time it worked great...i love demented humor...its my practice.
Dear Poetand knowit:
Thanks for the help on my poem "Just Another Day." I really do appreciate the assisstance. If you continue to read my stuff-----all help will be appreciated. By the way, I really liked your piece, "good-bye kansas city:meditation #2. Also guess what-----I was born in Kansas City, MO in 1941-----and then grew up in Junction City, Kansas, 120 miles west of KC. Your Friend in Poetry, Doug PS I gave your poem a 9!!!
i heard wilderbeast heaven has bad-mitton and real creab. all jokes aside. i'll rate this one.
Oh yeah whatever so I'm just supposed to open the box and let you in? You of all people should know that Nasdaq don't just provide a deliberate obligation to squeeze, without all the fuss of salivating oyster kernals and unfulfilled brag handles. There are other perks as well, you know. And we aren't talking about a total reversal of policy, here. Merely the odd boomerang thrown in to eliminate any overhead. Whether it's up to you or not is a matter for that cone to decide, because besides curtains and foundations, what more could a potential buyer ask for?
High yeildings in pharmaceudicals?
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