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good-bye kansas city: meditation #2

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · Edited 12 Aug 2002 · 8 comments

last night I had this dream we made love passionate, rough porno movie love once or maybe twice maybe three times and then like nothing a crocodile slashed your head off.

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[9] razorgrin 12-Aug-02/3:22 PM Reply

This is fantastic! I giggle!

[6] nentwined 12-Aug-02/8:30 PM Reply

good surrealism.

[10] limonade 13-Aug-02/11:47 AM Reply

I wouldn't call it high art. But that crocodile... man, I love that crocodile.

[8] brazen 14-Aug-02/10:50 AM Reply

i hate when crocodiles come out of nowhere...but this time it worked great...i love demented humor...its my practice.

[9] dougsoderstrom 17-Aug-02/3:08 PM Reply

Dear Poetand knowit:

Thanks for the help on my poem "Just Another Day." I really do appreciate the assisstance. If you continue to read my stuff-----all help will be appreciated. By the way, I really liked your piece, "good-bye kansas city:meditation #2. Also guess what-----I was born in Kansas City, MO in 1941-----and then grew up in Junction City, Kansas, 120 miles west of KC.

Your Friend in Poetry,
Doug

PS I gave your poem a 9!!!

[10] Bachus 11-Dec-02/11:02 AM Reply

i heard wilderbeast heaven has bad-mitton and real creab. all jokes aside. i'll rate this one.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11-Mar-03/12:59 PM Reply

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[n/a] horus8 11-Mar-03/1:11 PM Reply

High yeildings in pharmaceudicals?