Re: a comment on Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8	5-Mar-03/12:40 PM
Well, well. I am not a man. I never was. And as for shame? Shame on you. This reminds me of the day i over heard Ebola and AIDS having a detailed conversation during happy hour at the tgi friday's down the way a bit. and i quote AIDS - what do you mean they have a new cocktail? EBOLA - I'M SICK OF THIS FANCY SHIT FOR FUCK'S SAKE I JUST WANT A BLOODY MARY. (BUBONIC PLAGUE COMES IN AND SITS NEXT TO THEM) PLAGUE- (TO THE OTHERS) HEY FELLOWS (TO BARTENDER) GIVE ME A BLACK RUSSIAN. aids and ebola JUST LOOK AT ONE ANOTHER AND LAUGH. Settle, i have more shame then the lead singer of great white without his favorite bandana.
Re: a comment on Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH	5-Mar-03/12:18 PM
Don't get me wrong. I like it really, you have woven a finely crafted tale of superb stereotyping and thought provoking inuendo's but in actuality I don't believe that you have the inside lane on what these people have went through. Which leaves a bit of a silly taste in my mouth. Now, obviously i don't believe you to be a chigger on any level. don't be ridiculous. i'm just stating my opinion. i'm not one of these poets bent on explaining pointless rhyme explanations or pentametor. I am not one to argue Neoclassic from Romantic or imitation to intentional fallacy. I consider most poets at six having the ability to rhyme in some creative way, thus it's like math professors discussing simple arithmitic so, point being, when you came over to my poem and started talking rhyme gibberish and all of this other simpleton rubbish i was a bit perturbed, that is all. Poetry is hardly about rhyming. It is an art form used by god's to create entire galaxies. it is magical and should not be taken lightly by dentists or asians anywhere lest they go blind and mad. When you can write a Roman A` Clef get back to me. Durt or God of death or betty or whoever. What i know is people, and you knew very few of the people you presented here in this tale even remotely (maybe one). This is all my opinion, and i am entitled to it. What i am saying in all 'tenses possible' is don't come shit on my yard and not expect me to piss on your fence.
Re: a comment on Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH	5-Mar-03/12:01 PM
"From above, the mechanic rhythm Of another's ecstacy, As empty as the one below. The old man, to be young again, Takes pleasure in the act, While the woman Underneath Prays for its end. Her prayer is answered With a gasp and a shudder, As the squeaks decrescendo To a soft pianissimo" this forced a giggle though. through clenched perfect teeth of course, the squeek of the fecund.
Re: a comment on Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH	5-Mar-03/9:52 AM
No, i liked the poem Mr. or Mrs. God of death. it's just that well i don't try and write about flying the space shuttle because i haven't granted i could imagine. Now, my point is that theory also applies to your mediocre and one sided grasp of heroin addiction in this poem. It's obvious to me that you've never shot up heroin, or have been close to someone who was a hard core h-addict on any level (and don't give me thaT I'M THE ASIAN DRAGon chaser shit because i see right through it, and this poem, and your face). That was all. oh i meant my mom not yours. i'm the wigger, chiggeri
Re: a comment on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	5-Mar-03/9:44 AM
Please, and shut the fuck up don't fit well together Dur ah i mean holl- i mean betty, it's just shut the fuck up or GO FUCK YOURSELF, THE EVER GRAND, FACE FUCK YOURSELF WITHA CHEESE GRATER. TOE FUCK YOURSELF WITH a elephant foot, vagina shovel your fucking vulva, mow your moose knuckle with with a pair of north korean fags dressed up likematching scissors. I never said i was the best poet. i said poet. i practice dentistry as a hobby and fiswt fucking. here try this from my sole to yours. http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/gangbox.mp3
Re: Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH	5-Mar-03/2:04 AM
It's always sad to see straight edged hip hop wigger's trying to describe their mothers pain. You my friend are a master. A true knower of what it is to know what it is. i'm impressed, we all are very very impressed and moved by your words here 10!
Re: a comment on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos	5-Mar-03/1:49 AM
Why is flawed two? say it. does it sound like two to you. Would whaled be two too?
Re: untitled by betty	5-Mar-03/1:32 AM
Delightful.
Re: a comment on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	5-Mar-03/1:15 AM
Well Betty, earlier this morning our buddy Durt here thought he was a poet and came over to my poem, gave it a four, and then made some stupid ass comment like he knew what in the fuck he was talking about when really he didn't. I was willing to let his piece of shit poem slide right by without a word, but then i went and read it and was like that fucker foured me? without having even the common decency to read the piece ( i fucking hate skimmers because they miss key shit then look stupid trying to blame it on late night studying), and well that changed everything. Ask Durt how he would like it if i came into his predentistry testing areas and was like "how can a room be outside?" or the Alovar process occurs when a human being reaches three certain age ranges blah blee blow blee? Really, i can only tolerate so many assinine cross over poets acting like they know what in the fuck they are talking about when they don't. Poetry is a way of life not a tribute to those in need of extra hobbies or shit to do over a boring summer. You disrespect the art form and poets the world abroad by approaching it with that attitude. You are either born a poet or not. You either write or you don't. There is no fucking middle of the road. I'm sure Durt wouldn't clean one side of someone's mouth one morning while forgetting the other, and then be like, whoops, i'm sorry i was day dreaming about poetry, no, it doesn't work like that. In all honesty this poem is self serving 'what if scenario' drivel that is wallpaper and fodder for nursing home bathrooms, and hallmark stores. It's like a kid in the back seat asking, "are we there yet?" when they know for fuck's sake that we are not even close! End of story, and Durt you have my permission to correct how i brush my teeth all day long, but please don't try and discuss poetry with me unless you are ready to, and know precisely what it is you are dealing with (other then me the asshole). That's it in a nutshell betty. Penguins don't drink seal blood with polar bears that's the way of the Tundra.
Re: The Tragic Life of a Stinky Cheese Man by bunniesnangels	4-Mar-03/4:17 PM
Cheese and garlic are for the intelligent. Jesus would say maybe he smells bad to your nose but if you bear it he might smell good to your ears if you listen he might have something to teach you, and by the way, i also prefer cheese to cookies any day, but i did think this a good poem so 7.
Re: a comment on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	4-Mar-03/4:08 PM
"You are the children of the Lord your God; you shall not cut yourselves nor shave the front of your head for the dead" Deuteronomy chap 14 V1 "Has then what is good become death to me? Certainly not! But sin, that it might appear sin, was producing death in me through what is good, so that sin through the commandment might become exceedingly sinful." Romans Chap 7 V 13 "There is some shit i will not eat" E E cummings. Well Durt, since you like quotes and all. I don't drink by the way i quit to start quoting Marie Ebner von Eschenbach. She downed the bottle because that's what these kinds of 'sensitive' people are good at, but life is more then what can and can't fit on or in a bottle of anything huh Durt. No matter how many different ways you try to write it, it all equates to the same concluding dilema that being a cowards way out of a situation that requires thought not the selfish stupidity of a misunderstood suicide. maybe you should of wrote her more poetry and less grocery lists
Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8	4-Mar-03/1:33 PM
Also; if you think it was about the four? You are wrong. Ranking has no value to me other then to watch others need for it. Although, if it could be ranked this poem is pi'. Giving it a four only validates the genius of the pina colona versus the long island ice pee. Thanks again.
Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8	4-Mar-03/1:26 PM
Durt, i'm a poet. I don't have a fucking professional career. I write what i see. i say what i want. i believe in myself enough to bring it all to me until it compresses me into nothing. i am a poet. not a dentist. i am the element of change the remains always changing. i am evolution. i absorb like sponge bob. you know not the power of my perfect smile, sir.
Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8	4-Mar-03/1:20 PM
Yes. Role is also missed purposely. How are you these days? My phones back on, so.
Re: a comment on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8	4-Mar-03/12:41 PM
Like wise i'm sure, did you read the comments? They are hilarious. My feet are cold i stink and need a shower. bye.
Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	4-Mar-03/12:34 PM
Well, predentistry. That pretty much explains it (your lack of poetry) Get your fucking face out of peoples mouths man. There's a world around you. If you want to be a poet, you go to school for it too, understand Durt? Don't come to a fucking poetry site and think you can write us a prescription of extra weak tylenol, and convince us that you have something noble to say. It's really unimpressive, and frankly in poor taste sir, good daye
Re: Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3	4-Mar-03/12:24 PM
Ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing? ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! has it ever crossed your mind that you are terribly uninteresting? get off of the floor nobody gives a fuck, do you know how many kids went to highschool before you? went through the same shit? You make me ashamed. Grow up, get up, shut up. This poem wins THE BRASS TURDE AWARDE (created by me and da, and settle, in a basement of an attic on a submarine full of prawnes scantilly clad in your tear soaked g-strings, perhaps you should swallow a fucking bottle of Durt's Tylenol? Hey there's a thought... Oh but alas that wouldn't leave a scar would it? Try taking them while jumping off of a building then... Yeah now that's a scar. My motto is either do it (kill yourself) or shut the fuck up, okay? because in case you haven't noticed in the world around you? we have oil to steal and no extra funds to vitamin e your scars whelp. You are on your own. Get up, but don't keep writing. try voice lesson it works for most badly dressed whiny canadien and american and european pop starletts who have an important message such as yours? What was your message again? ah... yes, small tits. next.
Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	4-Mar-03/12:11 PM
lol. here's your three back Durt in the form of a two. Why? This is neither informative, daring, poetically different in any manner what so ever, but overall, the theme is as common as ice cream on a hot day. You are about as creatively interesting as CNN. Sorry. Now if she drank gasoline while it was on fire you'd be onto something now wouldn't you?
Re: a comment on The Drunkest ever by horus8	4-Mar-03/12:04 PM
You are an idiot. Please don't comment on my work if you're stupid, okay? Picture this... the bathroom? is so fucking dirty and stinky? it makes you piss outside instead. YOU ARE OBVIOUSLY TEN, and have never been to a real hole in the wall bar. Every mistake in this poem is purposeful. now that said. You know nothing of poetry don't make yourself look like an idiot under my creations please, thankyou i have work to do this morning other then making you go duh.
Re: a comment on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Mar-03/11:59 AM
Just for you i'll stay forever dick head, know why? because i can write better then you all day long one handed left handed no handed any which way every day. That's a fact. You want to challenge that? Throw down your best i'll through down mine. Whoops! i have over two hundred finely crafted poems here take your pick, regardless you will find yourself considerably outmatched. Oh... also I rock harder then you just visit my website and take your medicine like a good little toy rocker, exactly. Reap it. Hurts huh? tsk. Is there none who can fell Grendal? Where is my match? Boring.