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This Endless Soul (Free verse) by Ellie95 This endless soul,
Travels through dreams
As the exausted body recieves
no rest.
The worn colides,
With everyday and seeks
To be released from the
torments placed upon a
burdened life.
Up the ladder:
Harness
Down the ladder:
A true love
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Posted: March 3, 2003 12:21 PM PST; Last modified: March 3, 2003 12:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8557 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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3-Mar-03/12:41 PM
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This is the worst poem I have ever seen, and let me tell you, I've seen 'em all!!!!1
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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3-Mar-03/12:54 PM
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Here, or in general. did you know that i am approaching my 5,000 comment?
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23
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3-Mar-03/4:04 PM
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Bollocks. They're split across half a dozen different accounts. You can't count them together.
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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3-Mar-03/6:24 PM
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5 to be precise, and why not? i don't seperate their styles, or anything.
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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3-Mar-03/12:55 PM
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4,000 which, of course are useless, but i believe the others could be woven into a fine kilt or quilt.
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