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Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

Unnatural it is to miss your fairness Which even a sightless being could embrace If the world had rendered my eyes forever dark I would yet be enamored by the beauty Flowing from the faithful capturings of you

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[8] horus8 5-Mar-03/1:32 AM Reply

Delightful.

[6] emeraldeyes 5-Mar-03/6:59 PM Reply

i too enjoy this.

[10] THE GOD OF DEATH 8-Mar-03/2:47 AM Reply

I love it. Good use of ending words for each line. I like the words: rendered, enamoured, caputurings. Nice use of verbs. Overall, succinct, and highly personal at the same time.

[10] DurtKL 23-Jul-03/11:04 AM Reply

this is great