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untitled (Free verse) by betty Unnatural it is to miss your fairness
Which even a sightless being could embrace
If the world had rendered my eyes forever dark
I would yet be enamored by the beauty
Flowing from the faithful capturings of you
Up the ladder:
balthazar
Down the ladder:
Sonneting the samples & green eyes
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Posted: March 5, 2003 12:29 AM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 12:29 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.55 Overall Rank: 2474 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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5-Mar-03/1:32 AM
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Delightful.
i too enjoy this.
I love it. Good use of ending words for each line. I like the words: rendered, enamoured, caputurings. Nice use of verbs. Overall, succinct, and highly personal at the same time.
this is great
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