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untitled (Free verse) by betty

Unnatural it is to miss your fairness Which even a sightless being could embrace If the world had rendered my eyes forever dark I would yet be enamored by the beauty Flowing from the faithful capturings of you

THE GOD OF DEATH 8-Mar-03/2:47 AM
I love it. Good use of ending words for each line. I like the words: rendered, enamoured, caputurings. Nice use of verbs. Overall, succinct, and highly personal at the same time.




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