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balthazar (Haiku) by UnityMitford thinking about it
i always feel most alive
when burning bridges
Up the ladder:
yellow afterthoughts
Down the ladder:
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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: February 28, 2003 6:17 AM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2003 6:21 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.55 Overall Rank: 2473 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.3
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28-Feb-03/6:54 AM
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This is much much better if you mean 'burning bridges' literally.
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==Doylum @ 62.64.152.141
> Tintagiles
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28-Feb-03/7:21 AM
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Why?
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UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179
> Tintagiles
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28-Feb-03/7:30 AM
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i'll leave the anaysis up to you, snaggletooth.
well, my old pal, i see what you are saying here, and i'll not lend you my box matches, nor let you siphon my gasoline!!! i may need them myself, and nothing makes me happier than a gigantic FIRE!!!!!
we'll have a garage sale and listen to songs for the apocalypse.
Great haiku Tony, sorry i've been healing from a groin pull these last three days. i've read it, and i would like to have a phone meeting about it with you 12:00 my time 3:00 yours tomorrow if possible. I think we are good to go. Great revisions, and way to sink the magic bullit. 10.
HEY!!! you promised that that would be "our little secret"!
you big jerk!! (heheheh! i made a pun.)
in case you don't get the voicemail, i'll call you tonight. can't do the 3pm thing tomorrow. groin pull? hmm.
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