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Sweet, Sweet... Daddy (Villanelle) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
Mr. Man, is serving detention
I can't fit my face through his bars
An angry man needs attention.
Mrs. Man claims it's prevention
Making that nigger hide his scars
Mr. Man, is serving detention
I'm at home with incarceration
Why should I get to count stars?
An angry man needs attention.
I watched you give freedom a C-section
Behind black windowed bullet proof cars
Mr. Man, is serving detention.
A New-World-Order is in gestation
Invented between their bogies, and pars.
An angry man needs attention.
A Vilanelle for your contemplation
I refuse to rhyme those above with wars.
Mr. Man, is serving detention.
An angry man needs attention.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8461537
Weighted score: 4.8471837
Overall Rank: 10599
Posted: March 5, 2003 7:31 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 8:00 PM PST
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0 FOR YOU HANDRINOS
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Thanks, from my chair to yours.