poemranker ::20 most recent comments by horus8 (1561-1580) and replies

Comments byhorus8, 1561–1580 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Knights of progress 'alter boy shamed' by Bachus 8 May 2003, 2:30 PM
Seriously, do you think that bothers me?
Perhaps, I should just call it quits
because you don't read it half way through.
Boy, oh boy, oh boy. Where were you when I
cared about caring about what people thought?
Exactly.
on Disappear by sk8boardandpoems 8 May 2003, 2:24 PM
I pray to Lucifuge that you FUCKING DIE, so go to it. Tail drop off of the grand canyon aqnd 50 50 grind on a bald eagle on the way down.
on Dance With Me by marvelis 8 May 2003, 2:22 PM
dance with yourselve.
on FeaR by psikosis 8 May 2003, 2:20 PM
Must of been that one big R that kept your tears from falling tough guy huh? Listen to more Sublime and less siouxe and the banshees.
on Frozen by Mona Lisa 8 May 2003, 2:18 PM
Not bad at all.
on Fingers 'Round My Heart by Wulf 8 May 2003, 2:15 PM
Nice bike.
Did you know he hung up there for thirty minutes?
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe 8 May 2003, 2:02 PM
lungkot, yes, and a side of winter fresh peas please.
on Skin on My Soup by jessicazee 7 May 2003, 7:26 PM
Ha! Clammychowdher.
on Inquire Within by jessicazee 7 May 2003, 7:24 PM
Improved.
on I wish... by Jai 7 May 2003, 7:20 PM
Honestly? I enjoyed very much how you rhymed too with three you's, but then, finished off with a true. Staggering, and very suspenseful. I'll raise you one zero blue vote, and see you a green one.
Well, there goes my beaver sandwich and oyster pudding all over the bored-key.
on electric fountain by crin 7 May 2003, 5:00 PM
handy to keep around for a mediocre date.
on Mid Night Snack by GregDeEgg 7 May 2003, 4:57 PM
Solid enough.
on Too Dead to Live by DeadtotheWorld 7 May 2003, 4:54 PM
Pederasty, pure and simple. Yes, die.
replying on Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8 7 May 2003, 4:50 PM
It's obvious, in America we call it hitting a nerve, or pushing a button.
replying on lost (short) by sir_heff 6 May 2003, 8:25 PM
add more what? heff perhaps? yes, bring more heff to your poem sir! farGHHHHHHHHHH! arrrdghhhhhhh. just now there was a triple homocide 5 mile from everyone, everywhere, and know one knows it yet. cool.
replying on Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8 6 May 2003, 8:22 PM
Are you going to tell me, honestly, that 'that' place does not truly & pathetically represent everything that you and I detest about this planet currently? hmmmmm? I hope not, because, I'm planning on opening up big black magic on Cancun with my left hand one day soon. It will be back to a sharks playground, soon enough. All of those boobies and std's coupled by bad food? please. COME ON WHO'S WITH ME! (I'm just pissed because trailer kid's only get to go to Mazatlan) shame really, all of that pot senselessly smoked... Ass sex... goldenshowers... fisting... coleslaw....fine hinas, rookas, saske homie. chalez. (The other day, it was funny, at this drug spot, i was coppin' and this chicano dealer was like [after eye balling me for ten minutes] he goes "hey man...You know what you need essay?" i just smiled, and was thinking, "well, yeah, my fucking drugs?" "but i didn't say anything, and he goes "you need motherfucking jesus?" swear to god. how funny is that?. this guy is selling me hardcore narcotics, and he's like "mother fucking jesus" I could only just stare at me foot though. funny. life sometimes, huh.
on lost (short) by sir_heff 6 May 2003, 3:25 PM
I lost my body, in the sands of time.
Lost my mind, to the sound of this rhyme.

lost everybody, everyone I know.
I lost everybody, that's why I'm alone.
replying on You wash up, I forget. by Bachus 6 May 2003, 3:10 PM
Quite enjoyable, it was no gangbus though. Gangbus, I feel is the comic relief of the future. It could save the planet.
This was very inventive and like I said, very funny.