Re: may 18 by Bill Z Bub	19-May-03/3:48 PM
"it's all in the past." Would kick out the bottom if it was " and the whole thing was that" or only that, or just that. I loved it all the way until that.
Re: a comment on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8	19-May-03/3:44 PM
Vilanelle A Villanelle: "is 19 lines long, but only uses two rhymes, while also repeating two lines throughout the poem. The first five stanzas are triplets, and the last stanza is a quatrain such that the rhyme scheme is as follows: "aba aba aba aba aba abaa." The tricky part is that the 1st and 3rd lines from the first stanza are alternately repeated such that the 1st line becomes the last line in the second stanza, and the 3rd line becomes the last line in the third stanza. The last two lines of the poem are lines 1 and 3 respectively, making a rhymed couplet." --. I pray this helps the 'ism' of your beak. If not. Oh, well.
Re: If this isn't plagiarism I don't know what is... by Yardbird	19-May-03/11:59 AM
Well that was a waste of web space. What do Bill z. bub. Dark fandago, and Yardturd have in common one might ask? That's easy. The need to reach deep down into eachothers soles for comfort, and belonging, to anything, especially. this lovely site "poemfaker".con
Re: the rhyming one by nugit15	19-May-03/11:52 AM
Young, but well on it's way. Ted Nugit sucks buffallo balls. you might consider changing your name.
Re: To dust by casey	14-May-03/11:04 PM
Opinions, unfortunately, go straight to dust too.
Re: a comment on Ode to the inafamous dark angel by Lucifer	14-May-03/10:23 PM
Surprise! "Review of Another funeral hymn by horus8 N/R Urban Western Goth This song/sound pleases cinematically. . .the cross-weave of western desert acoustic & hip-hop/r&b is engaging, as well as the lyric references to psychic vampire, etc. Enjoyable mix! " I thought you would enjoy this more then say some other layman.
Re: Typical Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom	14-May-03/9:40 PM
"To met the big cheese" meet, but met's funnier, oddly enough. This was a bomber. Be proud. the other day my friend informed me I smelled like a giant roach clip. I wondered to myself, amazed, shit... No wonder no one has hired me in five years. Well almost no one. Pot head producers love my work.
Re: form: haibun by Poetsettle	14-May-03/9:24 PM
Virginia, when you eventually come out from underneath all of those shiny poetry medals and Heretofores. I will still be here, stripped of my many almost poetic awards. Naked, reading the paper. Waiting for you to fix me a hero's sandwich, and organize my confetti parade for the new world record setting yawn I've just let loose.
Re: Sanctuary by Lolly	14-May-03/9:01 PM
The world passes over. I watch from the peepholes. Neither friend, nor foe is welcome here. I am hunkered down. Waiting. Watching. Knowing. Deep within this watchtower. Protecting what is left. Well hidden within a greying. Folding hills, silent. Opening fields, hushed. listening to the rush of distant rivers and my heart thumping, Aching, but still undetected. Safer, this sanctuary These ancient walls. My thick hide. A guarded keep. For heaven's sake.
Re: a comment on Sanctuary by Lolly	14-May-03/8:42 PM
Good Shabbas.
Re: Ode to the inafamous dark angel by Lucifer	14-May-03/8:35 PM
Could we call this "Chode to the incombustible chia cricket" ? Thanks.
Re: Wake and Bake Club by sir_heff	13-May-03/9:32 AM
What is this? Plan b?
Re: time weights by brazen	10-May-03/2:57 PM
Well, it's different. That's for sure. I enjoyed it.
Re: a comment on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8	10-May-03/2:20 PM
Sir, I bid you refer back to the great serpent and snake war of 1994 when I single handedely rhymed 'wheelchair' with dew and jew in the same stanza. Then, upon having 'an' most educated of ideas I rhymed kolinsky with moonpie, and exploded. I then returned in three days, much to the suprise of many, and summoning up all of my might to rhyme top-soil with mop-bucket that's when I earned the yellow ribbon and souless shoe awarde for filtering through the semipermeable membrane of my own sole, and had become one with Sod the deity right below God and two below Mod! So there, you see the error of your envy, and that you sir, are the charlaten, not I!
Re: This makes no sense by thepinkbunnyofdoom	8-May-03/7:05 PM
This is very funny. I hope it was supposed to be right? Because it's very funny.
Re: a comment on Pele's pulse by <{Baba^Yaga}>	8-May-03/6:58 PM
horus808-May-03, 06:54 PM http://www.mp3.com/horus8 a place to go to dirty more nappies. Also where you'll find an electric version of the crutchling in your honor in a month or two. I fully plan on ripping off your entire collection of lyrics and devoting an entire album to you entitled "The unbreakable wind" It's the least I can do really. To show you how much I love you. You fucking toucan. here's something you might find interesting not that you are mature enough to grasp anything above your waste, but perhaps you might gather a chuckle. Check out this article -- Filmmaker May Sue Evans, Carter To Stay In the Picture. Here's the url: http://www.nyobserver.com/pages/frontpage7.asp
Re: a comment on Totem Pole by horus8	8-May-03/6:37 PM
Yeah, it's a song so, that's just one of those places where your voice's tempo has to stutter jam like bob dillon. Where you sing on the up and down beat. I have a version recorded, perhaps you'll here it soon, and dig on what i'm jiving at.
Re: a comment on Dance With Me by marvelis	8-May-03/4:05 PM
Fart do I now face your on? Yes, you're on fart face.
Re: Spam by Blade	8-May-03/3:27 PM
Yes, peas. Peas through an industrial straw.
Re: a comment on AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}>	8-May-03/2:52 PM
They are both not limericks actually. The top one is closer though obviously. Thanks for the eight mate. Tell me, how's blade these days?