on Water Runs Deep by shwenatjadeflower
21 May 2003, 8:12 PM
"quatet" it could only be better if it was a twatet. Could you incorporate say... waterskiing sumo wrestlers playing ping pong in between jumps, because that would be even more damn organic.
replying on Activating your Infinity by horus8
21 May 2003, 7:54 PM
I never watched tv. I read.
replying on Activating your Infinity by horus8
21 May 2003, 4:38 AM
Why wouldn't I? Better you then others I can think off, unless, in your off time, you're the others.
replying on Activating your Infinity by horus8
21 May 2003, 4:20 AM
Hows this edit, better?
replying on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8
20 May 2003, 4:47 PM
Don't wow my fucking poetry man, go wow your own. Because I can't appreciate it since everything I've read of yours is obviously some sort of trendy inside joke that I have no respect for, since, you have no respect for poetry. If you did, you'd write poetry and not nonsense. Unless you are looking for help, then ask, if not, go fuck scoria and scorpion holes. Thanks! wow!
replying on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8
20 May 2003, 4:42 PM
Don't you ever get sick of being an idiot, really. Because, you are, John. you're a fucking let down to yourself, your family, and jesus, now, go fuck a chunk of pumice.
on Love Squirts by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
20 May 2003, 11:33 AM
permutation.
on Bitter Breakfast by nugit15
20 May 2003, 10:11 AM
Getting there.
on Far from Gone by Freethinker1602
19 May 2003, 6:48 PM
Septic, and hopelessly without style, or base.
on you can hide but never ever run by Freethinker1602
19 May 2003, 6:31 PM
"I can't bare the thought of how badly it got to be" This gives new meaning to the "American" sentence. No, wonder the brits think we're fucking idiots, thanks.
I cannot bear to think about how bad it had become.
"I can't run form it" Good, either can I. lol.
nightmare, unless yoou mean the mare of the night? I thought I sold that old nag? Other then that, guess what? Your poem is not poetry, not original, not sad, not informing, special, enlightening, 'cool'. Sadly, I'm ashamed of you and American poets. Good job. 1. By the way, do you even know what a nova is? because after reading this I'm concerned that you are a pathetic tail chaser if anything.
I cannot bear to think about how bad it had become.
"I can't run form it" Good, either can I. lol.
nightmare, unless yoou mean the mare of the night? I thought I sold that old nag? Other then that, guess what? Your poem is not poetry, not original, not sad, not informing, special, enlightening, 'cool'. Sadly, I'm ashamed of you and American poets. Good job. 1. By the way, do you even know what a nova is? because after reading this I'm concerned that you are a pathetic tail chaser if anything.
on Liar's Mirror by kassanna
19 May 2003, 6:18 PM
"my age defying makup" makeup.
Some capitals and punctuation might help also.
Other then that, terribly boring and hopelessly self absorbed. nice job. here's a six.
Some capitals and punctuation might help also.
Other then that, terribly boring and hopelessly self absorbed. nice job. here's a six.
on Just let me bee by DeadtotheWorld
19 May 2003, 6:12 PM
Pluperfect.
replying on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
19 May 2003, 6:00 PM
Yes, condensed, that's just the way I would describe it too.
on Why Are We Here? by beakism
19 May 2003, 5:57 PM
"Here we are, why? (Other) by Shardik
6.
Was that your beaver trap?
I need some fucking superglue.
I wish you'd stop writing about crap:
Was that your beaver strap?
I'm going to give you a map.
On how to find the soul-less shoe.
Was that your beaver clap?
I need some fucking friends.
That can deal with my odor.
Take out an ad for a front door ramp.
Was that your beaver trap?
No, it was mine.
6.
You've got a disgusting idea -
That you are better then everyone.
Take it some place else:
Like to the 99 beak store.
and buy some fucking tic tacs.
Note: ask the stock boy to reach that box
of disposable diapers, since I hate his face.
Your mother thinks you're gay;
because when you're that fucking smart.
You just are, but are all rocks round?
Were you beaten with a toilet paper roll?
You've got a disgusting idea -
that you are a special person.
Of this we are convinced,
and you are.
6.
You're the biggest blow hard I know;
You get everything possible right!
From your life, you've got family money.
And a passion to knead meat.
Now we all know you are special.
It's generous to call you a genius:
Because you're gay and open minded.
regardless of your two inch dick;
and love for shit like napkins.
How do you see over your own chin?
From that precarious level, talent.
Sir, your life inspires me, it's
like watching my tv rape an eggroll."
Here! Here! To aahhhhhhh. A toast tooooo, ah... Beaks with four holes stead three < the vikings all raise their horns, but one sad viking does not. He is ashamed to show the others the truth of his beak, that being, it's not, SHE eats with a gashed hoof a puss-ie with infection and a foul stench, she is no viking at all, she is an imposter.>
6.
Was that your beaver trap?
I need some fucking superglue.
I wish you'd stop writing about crap:
Was that your beaver strap?
I'm going to give you a map.
On how to find the soul-less shoe.
Was that your beaver clap?
I need some fucking friends.
That can deal with my odor.
Take out an ad for a front door ramp.
Was that your beaver trap?
No, it was mine.
6.
You've got a disgusting idea -
That you are better then everyone.
Take it some place else:
Like to the 99 beak store.
and buy some fucking tic tacs.
Note: ask the stock boy to reach that box
of disposable diapers, since I hate his face.
Your mother thinks you're gay;
because when you're that fucking smart.
You just are, but are all rocks round?
Were you beaten with a toilet paper roll?
You've got a disgusting idea -
that you are a special person.
Of this we are convinced,
and you are.
6.
You're the biggest blow hard I know;
You get everything possible right!
From your life, you've got family money.
And a passion to knead meat.
Now we all know you are special.
It's generous to call you a genius:
Because you're gay and open minded.
regardless of your two inch dick;
and love for shit like napkins.
How do you see over your own chin?
From that precarious level, talent.
Sir, your life inspires me, it's
like watching my tv rape an eggroll."
Here! Here! To aahhhhhhh. A toast tooooo, ah... Beaks with four holes stead three < the vikings all raise their horns, but one sad viking does not. He is ashamed to show the others the truth of his beak, that being, it's not, SHE eats with a gashed hoof a puss-ie with infection and a foul stench, she is no viking at all, she is an imposter.>
replying on If this isn't plagiarism I don't know what is... by Yardbird
19 May 2003, 5:37 PM
Well, I "thing" you're hardly charming, creative, or worth the lashing I could waste a page on. I also "thing" if you "thing" I was trying to be 'shocking' or controversial, you really are delusional, and also, I didn't beg you to come read it, you did that on your own, so "thing" about that for a while hoser. <yawn> <toot> <stretch>. Next!
on My Enemy by tacochick1666
19 May 2003, 4:14 PM
"So let me be alone in my own little world"
You are.
You are.
on What Happened by tacochick1666
19 May 2003, 4:11 PM
shit pure fucking cocca, fucking waste, but what timing. Yipee, for you.
on When will Tomorrow Come by kassanna
19 May 2003, 4:05 PM
Yes, copyright it, because I'm sure someone is just dying to steal it away and use it for their own lack of writing ability. Good luck with your writing.